Why use slashes all the time? Just pick one word.
Enveloping the cavern with dense Qi to the point that the Qi was almost liquified, enough to make/create an artificial river of Qi that was suspended in the atmosphere.
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
You could just not use the parentheses here and it would read a lot better
Thunder rumbled behind the group (where Roland was advancing) as countless lightning streaks slithered toward the entrance of the cavern, making the group have no choice but to move away from the cavern where Roland was advancing.
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
“Made of gun” is an interesting way to phrase it
Not letting the chance slip off Sebastian quickly pointed his pointed finger toward the body of the centipede as if his hand were made of gun.
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Nice
[ Liquified Marrow (Uncommon) (69% pure)...]
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Aaah yes this is definitely how a medieval man speaks
"Come on, now, all three of you start roasting me." Ray was dumbfounded, looking at his respect crumbling like a building of cards.
Fantasy · Xero_5825
Spell the whole word please. This feels like a text message.
"Thx for the help…"
Fantasy · Xero_5825
OH NO IM GONNA TURN INTO A WOMAN
And just like that, Ben Franklin, 32 years old virgin, found himself signing off from one life, perhaps embarking on a new journey altogether.
Fantasy · Xero_5825
'But the feeling of my sword sinking deep inside the monster's flesh...now that's addictive..'
Fantasy · Seraphinn_
"What creature is this? A New Zealand tuatara, perhaps? But with wings?" Bruce pondered, his mind whirling with confusion.
Fantasy · Rqmk
Ayo…?
Bathing with blood, flesh to flesh, penetrating one's physique using one's physique... The true barbaric battle in Leo's mind!
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao