The sentence used leant, not lent (at the time of my reading). Leant is a valid past tense of lean.
Harry leant against the door to the old building that he'd found a couple of days ago. It'd taken that long for him to, firstly, get himself a phone and secondly, get in contact with the agent that was selling the building and to set up this appointment.
Harry Potter: Syndicate of Heroes
Book&Literature · ERicart
caretaker should be Filch.
Are some of the paragraphs out of order? It seems he went to bed, got up put on school robes. Then greeted Hedwig, talked with roommate then pulled out his pj's and went to bed again.
Flying on a Surfboard was cool, but riding a flying broomstick was silly. That was his point of view.
Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood
Book&Literature · bobthewriter
Arctic Fox
I'd like to know which animal would be most interesting for Nathaniel to have. A Tiger? Falcon? or another? (They'll have ice powers)
Ice Wizard in Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Monk_of_Souls
Thought gobstones was more like marbles than chess?
AN: Gobstone's are wizarding chess like games.
Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
From late Latin meaning Pearl?
Author's Note: The Margarita Kingdom wasn't named after the drink. Try to find where the name comes from, I'm curious to see whether someone will get it.
Epoch: The Cursed One
Fantasy · SlyOW
Was this meant to be "shop's front" instead of "chop's front"
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Epoch: The Cursed One
Fantasy · SlyOW
You might consider a replacement for 'schedule' as there are no corresponding times or dates provided for the steps in his plan.
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.
Epoch: The Cursed One
Fantasy · SlyOW
Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality
Harry Potter and Manual of the Reason
Movies · Shiara_Wash