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2020-05-15 Joint France
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2 years ago
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The story is becoming a bit boring i found Maybe it would be good to finish the story in 10 or 15 chapter instead of making it last for nothing?

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3 years ago
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I find it stupid that you made his personality like this with no respect for him and the guardian .

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Anime & Comics · Kagethewriter

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3 years ago
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Didn't see harm other but the men tried to kill him and his friends.. And he let him go like that...

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3 years ago
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In the end you just let a op OC go who I suppose will come back latter hyper cheat and katsuo will need to face him and you will just make him op again...

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3 years ago
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I hope you will kill zeus one day he is so annoying!!

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3 years ago
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I have the impression you just don't make your Mc evolve and just make the OC stronger and stronger and the Mc seam weak ( English is my 2 language sorry)

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3 years ago
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I love this book but it's so annoying to see him obey all order his aunt tell him like a dog !! I know that you say it's because he miss his mother but that doesn't make sense he his 28 mentally and he was perfect whithout her

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3 years ago
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I'm a little disappointed of this chapter the OC reincarnate is a bit to much

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3 years ago
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Maybe you should do something that will make him mature during his stay a hogward like someone close to him die or something?

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Book&Literature · Parasyte32

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3 years ago
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I find the story was good in the beginning but now I find it boring and bland. And his wife will probably the woman in the sea I forgot her name