MellyK9

MellyK9

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MellyK9
MellyK9
7 hours ago
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honestly, the book was better than I expected. I read the reviews and there were some many people bitching that I expected the story to be teash but I am glad I have it a chance. I liked the intro a little with the monkey mama. Even though I felt like he was way too weak, it only lasted for one to two chapters. The only problem i have is that Darkseid lost too easily, and there aren't many planet busting feats, but assuming it is one of the cartoon universes that makes sense. I have no real problem with the book so far. There are a few grammar mistakes, but they are fairly infrequent. Overall: 7.3 / 10

MellyK9
MellyK9
1 days ago
Posted

started out decently but it just got worse. the story hardly even feels like hunter x hunter with every chapter. first there is a ridiculous hunter ranking system that makes no sense. there are disaster beasts that behave like cursed spirits which doesn't make much sense and every chapter seems to have paragraphs of straight info dump exposition repeatedly to pretty much no end and the fight scenes are just boring over all.

MellyK9
MellyK9
2 days ago
Commented

i really hate that xin will end up becoming the Luna. she already showed herself to be selfish and inconsiderate when after being told specifically not to she decided to fight the dragon guy anyways (who she obviously knew she was weaker that) and ended up forcing Gary to fight him prematurely to save her life, putting himself, his family and his gang at risk just to save her. not only that but she isn't even a part of the howlers gang or a werewolf and yet Gary just wants to make her the queen. Kai even told him that he shouldn't just make her the luna just because she is his girlfriend but dumbass Gary refuses to listen.

MellyK9
MellyK9
2 days ago
Replied to SamiOyakodonLover

i think he's braiding Thalia's hair, his girlfriend. also ageless doesn't necessarily mean you have no metabolic activity so hair should still grow.

Lucian sat beside Thalia, carefully braiding her black hair streaked with blue highlights, which had grown longer over time. He worked with practiced ease, creating a single braid that fell neatly over the side of her head. Annabeth, nearby, had a large sketchbook open on her lap, her pencil moving swiftly complete cutting off evertyping around her.

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3

MellyK9
MellyK9
4 days ago
Commented

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MellyK9
MellyK9
5 days ago
Replied to RED203

jjk is a really low tier verse that doesn't really have power greater than city level destruction. it is ridiculous to expect moharaga to have true infinite evolution.

Even with its ability to adapt, Mahoraga had reached its ceiling—matching a single Nine-Tails in raw power was the best it could achieve.

Naruto: Sukuna's Jinchuriki, I am Uchiha

Naruto: Sukuna's Jinchuriki, I am Uchiha

Anime & Comics · Fanglin

MellyK9
MellyK9
15 days ago
Replied to TrueImmortalDevil

orochi, Yamato, shamrock sword, that monk yokai from wano, Loki,

The devil fruit of the mythical beast species is a secret treasure that is even rarer than the strongest natural devil fruit. In the whole world of One Piece, the fruit of the mythical beast species has not appeared many times. There are only two in total.

One Piece Fire Dragon Roar

One Piece Fire Dragon Roar

Anime & Comics · nyawdao3

MellyK9
MellyK9
15 days ago
Replied to NoneAbove

filth. dirty dirty human.

MellyK9
MellyK9
16 days ago
Replied to Hiraeth_999

in public. no shame?

Once meat was in his mouth, he wouldn't let it go.

Bleach: The Strongest Shinigami

Bleach: The Strongest Shinigami

Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing

MellyK9
MellyK9
17 days ago
Commented

y is he not eating the fire

The second Sentinel fired a fireball, but he ducked and rolled, barely avoiding the searing heat. He reached the wreckage and grabbed a twisted hunk of metal.

Dragon Slayer In Marvel

Dragon Slayer In Marvel

Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh9669

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    Gun Slinger

    Action ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM

    Shawn woke up in a new and crazy world where monsters and beasts rome the land killing, while humanity breeds heros of great caliber to combat these demons. But where exactly does Shawn fit in this new world with his extraordinary gifts, only time will tell.

    23 Chs 135 Collections

  • Shadow Plague original

    Shadow Plague

    Urban SYSTEM

    An average 19 year old boy finds a mysterious artifact in a temple that kills him. But them brings him back to life no longer human with an insatiable need to conquer. But first he will need an army to march across the land and subjugate the week.

    5 Chs 0 Collections

  • Rift between worlds original

    Rift between worlds

    Sci-fi

    A boy wakes up in a world he cant remember, full of evil rampaging the streets. But what is he supposed to do about it, he is just some failed expirament. Who escaped being destroyed, what chance does he stand against this army of darkness.

    13 Chs 2 Collections

  • NightWalker original

    NightWalker

    Fantasy ADVENTURE

    One day an astroid appeared out of nowhere and struck the earth. This astroid was about 800km squared roughly the size of New York. When the astroid struck it caused minimal damage to the surface of the earth but it did something much worse. It covered the sky in a black cloud that changed the future of earth forever, both animals and human alike.

    2 Chs 2 Collections

  • The place of dead roads. original

    The place of dead roads.

    Others ACTION DEVIL

    Jupiter was named after the king of ancient gods, as if greatness was expected of him but anyone expecting that would be greatly disappointed. He was just a run of the mill teenage, he was reckless and adventurous. He was set for life thanks to his parents and it showed, he is a typical unappreciative child who doesn't understand how the real world operates. But then all of a sudden his world is flipped upside down and nothing is what it seems. His parents have gone missing and it is up to him to find them but in order to do so he must find his family who he has long since alienated. An thanks to the unexplainable appearance of a dangerous creature, he now questions not only the world he lives in but his very sanity as well. Will he be able to find the truth or will he just be another pawn in the grand scheme that is about to unfold. ....... Just a heads up I am not a perfect writer and I am just trying this out. I will make numerous errors, so please try to ignore them. And I will be accidentally jumping back and forth between past and present tense while writing, so for you English scholars out there please do not crucify me. ......... This is not fan fiction, I accidentally put it as that and have no idea how to change it.

    1 Chs 0 Collections