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EmpathicWan
LV 11Someone who enjoys a wide range of diverse stories and characters, but still sees the value in wishing for more. I don't like k*nk shaming, but I'm also not a fan of what I'm not a fan of, lol.
2020-04-23 Joint United States
You're awesome author, thanks for letting me know.
Is this story going to be purely yuri or is the man going to be involved somehow? I'd rather not get my hopes up for a yuri romance only to watch it turn into yet another man's fantasy so knowing in advance would be nice.
I'm feeling better so I should have a chapter out sometime tonight or tomorrow.
Keep in mind that Mari is just a young girl who's barely an adult by her world's standards. She doesn't have a good example of healthy romantic love in her life and it's her first experience with it. That desperate feeling of teenage romance driven by hormones on top of having trauma related to 'love' might be part of that discomfort. Or maybe I just like obsessive love stories (I don't. I really, really, don't if that wasn't clear from Lizabeth, lol)
I made it abundantly clear to Venna that he and I were just friends, explaining to her his predicament and why we kept up appearances. I had noticed that she was getting nervous about how close he was to me and I held hope that it was for the same reason I might get envious if she had someone like that. She appeared relieved after I explained the situation and that got my hopes up even further.
Lady Arkesh
Fantasy · EmpathicWan
More exclamations in your statements doesn't make them right. I already said she had a higher cultivation here, but that she *didn't* not long before. She suddenly became better in just a few short chapters. On top of that there's a clear indication that Qiao Guiying should still be injured by these attacks, but she's *untouched*. This is the poor reading comprehension I'm talking about. Levels only matter until the writer doesn't want them to matter. This isn't the only instance. I can tell your only concern is protecting your dignity so any conversation about it will just make your comments become more nonsensical. Please continue to enjoy this story, my original criticism was clearly not meant for someone like you.
Chapter 13 Spar: "You're one to talk! How did a mere 3rd Disaster cultivator like you come out utterly unscathed?! And a casual use of attributed Zhenqi to instantly shatter my Earth Shell!" While Qiao Guiying is technically better than her in cultivation level here, the author had her being comparatively weaker based on Xiao Hong's 'actual cultivation' not long before that. At least that's what the author kept trying to imply. On top of that her ability in her skills themselves should cause more damage to Qiao Guiying here. But the author doesn't care. Power, level, Qi, ability. It doesn't matter unless they want it to matter. I don't need to justify myself because your reading comprehension is poor. Just because you like it doesn't mean your defense of it is correct. If you enjoy it, fine. But don't ask people to dig through something to prove their own opinions to you just because you're upset they didn't enjoy it.
Thanks for your insightful comment! I really enjoy when my readers give me their honest opinions, and I find I actually agree with your points. As for Mari and Venna's relationship, well... I'll just repeat what I said in an earlier chapter. I have... plans... for their relationship. I have pretty strong opinions on what constitutes a healthy relationship and that will eventually be expressed in my writing. Thanks again for reading!
It might take a while for me to get to it but there is a decent explanation. Well, I hope the readers think it's decent at least, lol.
Seriously, please work on "there, their, and they're" In a sentence we use the adverb "there" to indicate a place or a direction. "We had to move over 'there' to go to school." We use the determiner "their" to indicate the possession of a group. "The family moved into 'their' house." We use "they're" as a contraction of the words "they are" indicating the action of a group. "The house 'they're' moving into is ugly." Simplified: Is it a place or direction? There Is it showing possession? Their Does breaking it into two words make sense in the sentence? They're
Clapping, I signal for them to stop and Tanuki and chicken return to my side while the students slump down in sheer exhaustion with some bleeding, other having broken bones but other than that their ok, they just look really pitiful to look at that it hurts one heart.
Reincarnated as a Fox girl in a cultivation world
Fantasy · Kikin2006
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original Lady Arkesh
It's the day before Young Lady Arkesh turns 13. Tomorrow she will be tested during a ceremony to confirm her potential as a mage, solidifying her position in the court, and earning her the respect of many. Depending on the outcome of course. With her parents negligence and her existence in the castle less than a ghost, she has suffered daily for the chance to earn the respect and love of her family tomorrow. With an unclear future, and her heart pounding, she hopes tomorrow will be better than her last 3 years... Initially I thought I wouldn't be able to write anything meaningful or maybe I'd just give up without following through. But this novel has taken on a life of it's own and I'm happy to share it with others. I hope you like it! A warning to any future readers: There is content covering anxiety, depression, thoughts of self-h@rm, severe neglect, @buse, and other mature themes. None of these are portrayed in a positive light and I attempt to write about it respectfully. Full disclosure, this novel will not contain: a harem, fut@, r@p3, or het romance with the MC.50 Chs 92 Collections
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Villain's Endless Harem
Fantasy · Dark_Knight_Spider