I just don't think there is anything interesting in the far off future of the fic that would merit a patreon sub. Like, the fic is interesting, sometimes something interesting happens that catches my attention, the smut is good, but there doesn't seem to be an overarching story that would demand a sub. I can just wait until the good stuff, if there are any. Any way, what I am trying to say is that there is no incentive for subscribing to read ahead because I can't see anything that is worth my money to read right now that I can just wait for.
Another thing, the numbers of patrons hasn't been rising lately, do you think there is something I should improve in this fic to gain more readers or patrons? Is the fic boring or what? Tell me!!
Anime & Comics · Marveller
Ok, I get the limitations placed by the world, he can only generate 1000 Gold a day right now. But I am confused by this last section. Like, if he spends 500 Gold, then wouldn't he be able to generate 1000 gold again tomorrow then pay the charity- Oh, he can't pay charity because he isn't old enough. You need to make that more clear, I had to write this to figure it out.
ch 0 8 Chapter 08 - Suspicions
Urban · Darpan_Biswas
Don't use sound effects, just tell us the sound that happens and we can imagine it much better than you could explain it to us in written form.
(Author's Note: Any noise and sound effect experts out there are welcome to assist me. It's a struggle for me.)
TV · daoistgingerale
The best balance between musculature, muscle definition, flexibility, and aesthetics. Much like a sprint runner's physique.
"There is no greater distraction upon this ship or in my very life than you Elesmere." I said as I stood up from my own meditation mat and confidently stripped my clothes showing off the strong swimmer's physique, I had crafted with my body cultivation, leaving no natural imperfections except for a couple moles to avoid the uncanny valley effect.
Video Games · Azazyel
Its good. Its kind of slow, but good. I like it.
Though I'm curious: how many of y'all even like this novel? Since, to me, it feels somewhat subpar.
Movies · Ozonelayer
Essence of Blank
Absolute Erasure
Existence Manipulation
No, this does not happen like this and that is not our thought process. If you wear dirty or worn out clothes, then you can expect to be judged as poor or some variation of that. Celebrities are certainly not like that either. Well, not all of them are like that. Just like not all people are good people. This level of racism and clasism is not so open, thought about, or even processed like that. What you WOULD find, is the classic making fun of an asian person's language, how they look, maybe assume they are a poorer class for the more racists bunch. But this level of racism is not mainstream or widespread. It is dramatized for the novel.
In their minds, they had already subjectively assumed that Seth, like other ethnicities in America, was either a servant of the house or a thief who had taken over after the apocalypse.
Sci-fi · AllenWorker
Diviiiiiiine Simp!
Witnessing the girl he had pursued for three years in high school, four years in university, and two more years into work.
Urban · Peace every year
Waste chapter and annoying. Just get to the good stuff already. Filler
ch 136 Chapter 135: Triple S!
Movies · Ozonelayer
Awesome story, however, thats not how it works... for Superman. Magic affects him as does any other normal mortal person. Meaning that Superman or even Kryptonians don't have any special weakness to magic that causes them to be more vulnerable to magic. It just affects them the same as any normal person. So, the strength this little girl has should not have any effect on Tut's skin, as his skin is near invulerable and the little girl only has 'little girl' strength. Now, if the hands and attacks of the little girl were somehow the enhanced with magic, then yeah awesome. Just a little pet peeve. Anyway, awesome story.
As incredibly boring as it was, for several hours, we stayed like this: I would punch my fist through her head while she'd regenerate, and this cycle continued until the morning sun started to shine which the instant it did, the girl suddenly stopped being passive, and started aggressively attacking me. Unfortunately, since this girl was supernatural and probably had mystical abilities, I wasn't invulnerable to her attacks; luckily, though, she only had the strength of a little girl.
Movies · Ozonelayer
run-on sentence.
The reason why he wanted Elena to know how to defend herself is so that she might be able to defend herself when he is never around in case something were to happen to her and who is the best person to teach her that other than Freya who has been honing her fighting skills over the years and creating different techniques and items to aid her so as to never be in a disadvantage whenever her magic fails her which she always says is unlikely going to happen.
TV · Adams2004
Maybe? Perhaps. But they would have to whole-heartedly believe that they are almighty. That's kind of hard to do when your own FATHER is the almighty. But then again it could just be one of those things where maybe they're not that powerful to achieve almighty status. So, I don't know. Maybe? Perhaps? Possibly?
Seeing the species I got my nervous look curved into a wide smile, as, the wheel said "Archangel (Lucifer, Lucifer Show)" and "Immortal (TVD)" Looking back at God with the smile I couldn't help but ask "Don't the Archangels have specific abilities? Am I getting my own or one of theirs?"
Movies · ArtoriaPendragon_
carpet in a classroom? as the floor? heh
The other people in this place I had identify as a classroom, I could see every detail on their faces: the crooked line of one's septum piercing and the flecks of gold in another student's hazel eyes. I was hyper aware of the smoothness and roughness of different textures around me: the scratchiness of the carpet under my rear and the coarseness of the wooden desk I fell out off.
Anime & Comics · Ekisdaiou
Because Iphone apparantly has to official way to save the clipboard. But android is just holding as if to paste and justing clicking clipboard from the options that appear.
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Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
Oh the phone. Android or Iphone?
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Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
Cutting is taking the characters from the current place and keeping it in the clipboard. Its probably still in your clipboard: To get to your clipboard history at any time, press Windows logo key + V. From the clipboard history, you can paste and pin frequently used items by choosing an individual item from your clipboard menu. Pinning an item keeps it from being removed from the clipboard history to make room for new items.
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Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
I would also recommend creation patreon exclusive content other than just advanced chapters.
Another thing, the numbers of patrons hasn't been rising lately, do you think there is something I should improve in this fic to gain more readers or patrons? Is the fic boring or what? Tell me!!
Marvel: I Need A New Body
Anime & Comics · Marveller