Phindar_DeDraeval

Phindar_DeDraeval

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Dear Readers, I write for you. Come, join me on the many journey's through lands unseen, with characters yet to be explored. I look forward to entertaining you all.

2020-04-17 Joint United States
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Phindar_DeDraeval
3 years ago
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A fascinating journey through a foreign world, filled with alien life, strange cultures, and societies that all come to life through elegantly worded descriptions. Aside from the first part of the first chapter, the story is told through the perception of Mae, allowing readers to experience her adventure, struggles, and decisions, through her filters. One gets to know the world and the variety of characters that accompany Mae on her journey along with her, making for an entertaining read. Recommend to everyone!

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Phindar_DeDraeval
3 years ago
Posted

Highly recommend! The premise of this story is fascinating, and well presented. The writing quality suffers from the typical grammatical, spelling, and formatting errors, but to the authors credit, is still better than most, and doesn't make the story a slog to get through. Well done.

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Phindar_DeDraeval
3 years ago
Commented

It seems strange that she is known for being hot-headed, but was nicknamed 'Ice Queen.'

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Phindar_DeDraeval
4 years ago
Posted

Engaging and enjoyable. Interesting concept. Quality has continuously improved. Personally find statistical information pulls me from the story. However the formatting makes it easy to skip past.

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