Thanks for the feedback, this is my first novel on such Genre
Yes, yes she did lol. She has to because olden times require a ready succewwor for the throne
The Queen Escaped with the whole family, and a Guest Principal Advisor. Included in this Escape was Prince Yosef, Crown Prince Lodayr, Prince Kanan and the Infant Prince Korol. The daughters include Princess Felina, Princess Kaja, Princess Judiah, Princess Camilla and Princess Nuyrah. All of them are accompanied by the Guest Principal Advisor named Haroldus. With them are guards armed with Grenavian Rifles and a coach driver.
Songur of Ixander
War · FranzJuniver
Love le novel, I have something similar, which I wrote personally. https://***.webnovel.com/book/songur-of-ixander_18687664805591205 Please continue on what you are working too :)
Yes, yes I am
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Fantasy · isharislynkia
Some constructive points. 1. I love the way you write. I have no opposition to it. Although the onomatopoeia can be managed, it's better and understandable as a layman's term. 2. I love how the story develops, but I like a quick-paced one. Not too quick though, as it may leave plot holes. 3. I notice the side stories, and side cliches and touches, I love how you describe the normality or how you describe the environment the character is in. 4. Build a better world for the novel. You decide how it be better. TBH I like the era the novel went through, and more TBHs, I did not like the theme or the focus of the novel, but this is one of those novels that caught my interest despite not being inside my scope of interest. Keep it up, and make the story better! In a bigger picture though I cannot judge as I have only read a quarter of chapters, but I'm liking it frankly.
This is what I mean by subtlety of expression, and the description of feels.
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Fantasy · isharislynkia
Just buy a new one next time.
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Fantasy · isharislynkia
PISHBOL, How I miss eating some if everything was to open!
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Fantasy · isharislynkia
A typical replacement for the real swear word LOL
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Fantasy · isharislynkia
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original Songur of Ixander
Fourteen Years after the Kingdom of Alban's Fall before the Republicans, the Albanese state is now under the reins of Willemus and is soon going to form a nation with the newly powerful East Alban Confederacy. How will Ixander then live while these are all happening knowing that he is Albanese in a Foreign Land? Ixander did not know that there holds more secret to who he really is... and his name. Suddenly however, a man from our world died in a bar brawl, and.. VOILA! He is transported to this land primitive compared to the world he was in. Follow Ixander in his journey to knowing his destiny and his duty to his homeland, the state of Alban.28 Chs 13 Collections
dis rhyme... REALLY?!
Crowning Cruel Crow
Fantasy · TacoKun