Story is nicely done, not rushed. Grammar sucks. Some work can be done in regards to character development or maybe I’m just adding a review too early since I’m only at chapter 80.
What’s with the poor grammar? I’ve seen you mistake there with their. Sometimes a missing word or even the wrong word.
Did the writing quality just drop all of a sudden? What happened?
The Tyrant Billionaire
Urban · DaasWolfe