kiwami803

kiwami803

male LV 15

I'm a fan of reading 👍 I'm wanting to learn how to write novels!

2020-03-06 Joint United States
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kiwami803
kiwami803
18 hours ago
Replied to Zetsway

The issue is that in our world, when a weapon kills us, for example a nuke, it won't spontaneously get an interest in our soul and decide to play with after we die Dying is the easy part, not becoming a plaything to a god is the harder part in a world like dxd Especially if you have knowledge you ain't suppose to know lol

This is because I know all too well that I'm currently in a world called "DxD." According to my memories from my previous life, this world isn't just filled with Devils, Angels, Fallen Angels, and various pantheons of gods, but also Dragons. It's a world where gods vie for supremacy, and as a result, I'm constantly in extreme danger.

In DxD with Sign-In System!

In DxD with Sign-In System!

Anime & Comics · DragonnX

kiwami803
kiwami803
21 hours ago
Commented

That is remarkably overpowered and even for Dbz it would be in the top 10 best techniques in the entire multiverse

"Don't get upset, it's not something devastating or world-ending, in fact I could tell you the concept because it's not very complicated. It will simply allow you to use 100% of your energy, no waste, regardless of your body's disadvantages, no one will be able to affect your energy, and you will be the absolute owner of it, so it is very demanding in terms of control and energy shaping.

Dragon Ball: A Better Bulma

Dragon Ball: A Better Bulma

Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse

kiwami803
kiwami803
22 hours ago
Commented

Maybe it's the intent, when she created the flower I'm sure she wasn't thinking of creating life but just wanted to help it

So only a few things could be 'benefited' by Bulma, but not that this was a bad thing, it just created an expectation and thirst for adventure in the girl, after all, if everything could be manipulated at her whim, everything would be boring. 

Dragon Ball: A Better Bulma

Dragon Ball: A Better Bulma

Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse

kiwami803
kiwami803
2 days ago
Replied to TreeBriarWood

If the editors just read it then it's really easy to fix, i really like this novel and it annoys me to no send to see these small but constant mistakes

The Witch, who had been continuously evading, stopped on a mountain peak and relaxed. Her severe injuries had completely healed, restoring her strength to its peak.

I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?

I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?

Eastern · Half a clear breeze

kiwami803
kiwami803
2 days ago
Replied to TreeBriarWood

That's only for the same realm, like if the mc was still in the dao realm and xu yan broke through then he'd be 100 times stronger in the dao realm

"A breakthrough in a minor realm can't even allow me to achieve a Minor Achievement in the Primordial Realm," Li Xuan sighed. By this calculation, if Xu Yan made a Great Accomplishment in the Establishing Dao Realm, he should be able to reach a Minor Achievement in Primordial Realm. If Xu Yan achieved Perfection of the Way, could he possibly reach Primordial Great Achievement?

I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?

I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?

Eastern · Half a clear breeze

kiwami803
kiwami803
3 days ago
Commented

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A life span of ten billion years should be enough for a successful breakthrough, right?

Steadily becoming a saint, the immortal officials hired me to tend the horses

Steadily becoming a saint, the immortal officials hired me to tend the horses

Eastern · Let me laugh

kiwami803
kiwami803
3 days ago
Commented

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The breakthrough in cultivation level consumed nearly fifty million years of his life span barrier, leaving Gu An with over sixty-seven million years of life remaining.

Steadily becoming a saint, the immortal officials hired me to tend the horses

Steadily becoming a saint, the immortal officials hired me to tend the horses

Eastern · Let me laugh

kiwami803
kiwami803
3 days ago
Commented

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Ten billion years of Life Span, the more he looked, the more exciting it was!

Steadily becoming a saint, the immortal officials hired me to tend the horses

Steadily becoming a saint, the immortal officials hired me to tend the horses

Eastern · Let me laugh

kiwami803
kiwami803
4 days ago
Replied to tedmosby2016

Anyone would be scared of aizen if they knew about him and then met in person 😂

[You have been introduced to Hakuda. Hakuda +2.][You have been introduced to Shunpo…]

Bleach: The Fifth Division Captain

Bleach: The Fifth Division Captain

Anime & Comics · michaeI

kiwami803
kiwami803
4 days ago
Commented

Turn it into a real ninja village

It wasn't hard to see why Orochimaru had chosen this place to establish his base in the original timeline. The daimyo of such a small country would be easily bribed, and without a powerful political structure or a significant population, it was the perfect place to establish a hidden village without drawing much attention.

A New Snake In The Shinobi World

A New Snake In The Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · Junk_dog_787