Nice POV chapter
TFTC
After a phenomenal start this has devolved into something like a regular Self-Insert Fanfiction. I urge the author to reexamine the beginning of the story and determine how it differs from what he's currently writing.
The premise sounded interesting so I started reading. Unfortunately this is written without any of the skill that would make this read enjoyable. At the current level this is more rambling than any proper story.
Again, you're using charm instead of cursed spirit.
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Journey Of Zoro In Another World
Anime & Comics · Fumiaki
You suddenly switched from using cursed spirit to charm.
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Journey Of Zoro In Another World
Anime & Comics · Fumiaki
In what world is multiplication a first grade problem?
Despite often blatantly sleeping through class, when teachers asked Zoro questions about the lesson, he answered without hesitation. Zoro wasn't particularly bright, but elementary school first-grade problems were a breeze.
Journey Of Zoro In Another World
Anime & Comics · Fumiaki
Pure chaos...
Schon in Englisch gelesen, die übersetzte Version ist noch schlechter. Power wank auf dem hochsten Level
Hearing Kurama decisively rejecting her idea of coming up with a unique way of laughing, Yuna couldn't help but pout as she watched Brogy and Dorry clash again and again, ultimately resulting in another draw.
Goddess of Ice: Going for One Piece
Anime & Comics · Maerry