Yeah, reading it really ruined any immersion hahaha dunno if this is original or a translated chinese fanfic. gonna stop there, might see some nationalistic shite if it continues.
thanks for the chapter
it's MTL'd on wuxiap
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Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
Here's Danzo with his empty threats
"You will regret this, Hiruzen."
Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
I agree with you on how annoying a conscious system can be especially if it isn't helpful to the host. It actually feels like Im' reading a chinese fanfic with how similar they are with story progression and on how the MC acts
I mean with the MCs decisions I think it's a miracle he got a janitorial job
So even though I transmigrated, I'm still going to be a janitor?!
Lost in Honkai, Starting the Gentleman Simulator
Anime & Comics · TypeMercury
title for raw is 原神：人在提瓦特，垂钓成神
Hope you continue this story even if it's just edited MTL. You did a great job at making it readable.
The story seemed interesting until you read a few sentences. Don't know if English isn't the author's first language. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes, broken paragraphs or sentences, even chapters are painstakingly short, which doesn't even progress the story or add substance in some way. I'd recommend reading other works to see how they structure or outline their stories.
Game Of Thrones: Dragons Rule Again
Fantasy · Sohum_karmaker