I plan on Doing Character development and I wasnt sure how to do that with my previous character, dont worry though his personality will end up similar except more rational and shameless
I Think he Should have more character development, if Someone had to constantly fight to survive i feel like they would be more ruthless and self profit oriented. Thats just my opinion though.
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Fantasy · Shankster
I like how the main character Is the Top Usually thats not the case I also like the romance between the MC and ML stories like these always make me have a high expectation of love. I really am enjoying this book so far and i cant wait to see what comes next.
The quality isnt the greatest but its not like the authors getting paid they dont allow powerstones and even if they did I wouldnt be mad. Despite the translation I like the story.
Why do they keep talking about how ‘alluring’ she is, she’s his sister.
"I'm... I'm fine..." Luo Xue reacted by shaking her head. However, her words were fairly weak and her alluring lips were rather dried and cracked.
Spiritual Qi Rejuvenation: Automatic Improvement
Eastern · Number One Cultivator
I think it’d be better if you put more space, as in make the Paragraphs smaller this isn’t an insult it’s just difficult for some people including me to focus on non spaced out paragraphs.
Do you have a discord? (like for Your novels)
I was just wondering how come its not possible for me to Give this book power stones?
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original The Blood Codex
What is it like to hate, to truly hate till the only thoughts that consume you are vengeance. Dexter had always felt a strong hate for the world, just as his father felt a strong hate for him. He comes across a book in the library called The Codex and right as he is dying he reaches out to it. [Awakening Blood Codex] [10% complete] [50% complete] [99% complete]6 Chs 22 Collections
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My Ruthless System
All his life Fang Yuan had always found it hard to sympathize others which made him an outcast but overtime he learned to fake it because it was the only way he could survive in life, but then he got a system one that finally made it so that he could get stronger by being ruthless... P.S. I won’t upload to much since I’m still in school and I’m not doing this professionally so it might not be that great.24 Chs 258 Collections
Ok thank you
The Blood Codex
Fantasy · IMoney