It is really cringe to read...
They were in motion, shifting positions so quickly it was hard to tell who was where. To the Shizi Dogs—and everyone watching—it looked like the Knights had doubled in number, players seeming to appear in two places at once.
Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog
Sports · SandKastle
Happy birthday! Hopefully the damage was not too harsh.
AN: Chapters were slower than usual this week, sorry about that. For one, it's my birthday today and while I never really celebrate it, I'll still be out of the house by the time this chapter is posted most likely. But the true reason for me being out of the house and not having released many chapters is that I came home from work to a flooded apartment this week.
A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)
Book&Literature · Nuclide
So sad to lose someone ... Don't like it and never will but the story feels more realistic like that. the chapters were intense and not sure how to say it in English but it felt weirdly vivid? Anyway thanks for the chapters!
4 sounds pretty good, enjoy the summer. :)
It's just that it won't be a chapter a day. I'll try to reach 4 a week, but no pinky promises cause it's summer and I'll spend some time in the sun (but only because I live next to a lake to cool down in).
A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)
Book&Literature · Nuclide
Thanks for the chapters.
Thanks for the chapters. Hope he can recover soon
Thanks for the chapters. It's kinda sad that he can't expose the red aurors
Nice :) looking forward to it
I came After Reading your other Story LATV and was quiet impressed. So after you didn't Update anymore I looked If you wrote more so i startend this ff. I think it's sad that your good quality writing doesn't geht enough recognition. Have to confess I am mostly guilty of not writing down the recognition and thanks for your efforts. Would be glad to read more of your Stories both this and the LATV. If you decide to not continue this Story (which would be sad) hope we are lucky enough that you write something else. :)
The detached from reality I can agree with think that fits the situation. The rest I feel like it's a bit hasty, a bit randomly tossed attributes given to the Mc... Not sure how to give him complexity better though. Feeling inferior to sunny and nephis would be the least of his worries in my opinion
Shadow Slave: Possibilities Without Meaning
Book&Literature · Lahi