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Don't worry about who talk behind your back... They're behind you for a reason.

2019-12-10 Joint Global
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Vaylen
Vaylen
6 days ago
Commented

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Two more strikes of the staff, and the Goblin mage fell dead.

Online Game: Starting with an SSS-Level Plundering Talent

Online Game: Starting with an SSS-Level Plundering Talent

Games · BigWhiteGoose

Vaylen
Vaylen
16 days ago
Commented

I can do that, when you uptade the chapters on patreon let me know. Even tho it's a ff and should be free, 15 is not much for a whole novel.

Vaylen
Vaylen
18 days ago
Commented

That's.... Low, bro is a man wh*re

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That means, if he plays his cards right, he could end up with a harem of two thousand peerless beauties!

ATG: My genius is almost frightening!

ATG: My genius is almost frightening!

Book&Literature · ImmortalCockroach

Vaylen
Vaylen
18 days ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. By the way, will u be updating only one chapter a day now?

Vaylen
Vaylen
20 days ago
Commented

I don't know, it feels a bit wrong to do that? I mean, maybe I don't remember, but did he even talk to her about having more than one partner and having a harem? Or it was like taken for granted?

Yun Wuji's eyes roamed over her rounded bottom and then her thighs. His breathing grew heavy, showing how much he'd been holding back since he separated from Chu Yuechan.

ATG: My genius is almost frightening!

ATG: My genius is almost frightening!

Book&Literature · ImmortalCockroach

Vaylen
Vaylen
20 days ago
Commented

I'm the most disgused by the fact that the "father" still acts like he had done nothing wrong.

Vaylen
Vaylen
22 days ago
Commented

Make her stronger than in the original. Strongest Mommy for the win.

Vaylen
Vaylen
23 days ago
Replied to Entrail_JI

Can u tell me who will MC end up with? Or rather if it will be some threesome? Because i can see that it has noharem tag, but on the other hand, in characters list, there are two women with tags x MC, so the relationships looks unclear to me.

Vaylen
Vaylen
23 days ago
Commented

For you to die?

But Qian Xunji didn't notice as he casually asked, "So, what do you want for your birthday gifts?"

Douluo Dalu: Qian Renxue's Younger Brother

Douluo Dalu: Qian Renxue's Younger Brother

Anime & Comics · Rashta

Vaylen
Vaylen
25 days ago
Posted

Normally I do not write reviews, cuz I'm a lazy bum, but this is quite a unigue type of FF, so I will motivate myself a bit. For startes, I can Recomend it to everyone who likes Bibi Dong and the side of Spirit Hall in general. Starting with The MC, who kind hearted and naive, which is justified, as in his first life he was a disable kid who hadn't experienced much of the world and the nature of people, he spend most of his live in a hospital tied to a bad. Even tho he is extremly kind, it actually works in his favor, because his system awards him for spreading kindess and love. The relationship bettwen him and his sister, Renxue, is very heartwarming and pure, from what I could see, there is no need to worry for incest here. The piece of trash, known by others as "Father", is not someone I'm willing to talk about no matter how he treats the MC, so I will skip him Bibi Dong is very well writen, her character didn't change, which as you can quess makes a problem when it comes to her relationship with children, her state of mind and psychological problems are very well portrayed by an Author, and the hate/love fellings for her children are to be expected, so there is quite a bit of drama and sad moments bettwen them, but from what I could see it will get better. The development of the story isn't very fast, MC and Renxue are still children of around 5, but it willl propably start to speed up after the issue with a "father" and Bibi dong will be resolved. Writing quality is good, at least it shoudn't be a problem for anyone to understand what is going on, just small mistakes here and there, but far far from MTL type of shit. A few chapter daily, so perfect, but we will see if the Author can keep this up after a while. Overall, one of the better FF of Soul land I've seen, especially bc I love to see some slice of live moments in cultivation novels. I lost like half of my life energy on this, so I will have to recover🤒