I’ve studied different martial arts for over 30 years and disagree. Her skill has already been shown and these guys are thugs/cowards, so it makes sense. There are some young ladies with very strong fighting capability.
"I'll never forget that girl from twelve years ago—the one I told to get stronger before protecting the weak."
Urban · LonelyTurtle
Probably demonstrating the random factor
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Games · exaltedlight
Rock and roll on your thesis!
ch 223 NOT A CHAPTER!
Fantasy · isli
I think this should be changed from “it was backlashed” to “it backfired”.
Apparently, Klaus was minding his own business but those twins were the ones who initiated the fight. He said that it looked as if they prepared traps to catch him and take his cores from him but it was backlashed.
Fantasy · MS_Reddy
Phone company circuits get overloaded in a crisis with everyone trying to call in to check on people or those inside calling out to reassure friends and family. That’s the case in something comparatively local like an earthquake, then expand it to a global situation and I’m only surprised that the system is giving them a busy signal instead of just saying circuits are down or something similar.
Hiding inside a nearby shop, Derick took a few sips of water and anxiously looked at the horde of zombies a hundred meters away. He tried calling his sister several times but received no response.
Fantasy · MoonTreeBA
That will lose them money. A $1 item with a 50% markup has a price of $1.50. 40% off is a price of $0.90, so it’s a loss on every item. Maybe rephrase to say the proposal is to reduce the markup 40% down to 10% ?
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Fantasy · Wateristubeg
Social reject. It’s with a J in this word
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Fantasy · JJ_Francis
Except it stops mid-sentence so no one gets all of it.
// The rest of the chapter is in the Author's notes//
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
Depends on the scene. The style should reflect the perspective of the character at the time. For MC, probably less flowery, but if another character is describing it then shift accordingly. Just my 2 cents.
ch 11 Advancing to Warrior-Rank
Eastern · thewhitesnow
Very good! Looking for much more of this in the near future!
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Those are Asimov’s laws, but it appears these mechanoids have different laws. Thank you for sharing Asimov‘s laws for those who aren’t familiar with them.
"When the era of mechanical civilization dawned, our forebears programmed three fundamental laws into the robots' brains, demanding respect for humans."
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Fantasy · Sugar_Chestnuts