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steavin_mcqueen
you should really read other stories that way you can know how to properly write a good story .
steavin_mcqueen
not even a true fan fiction story due to it being in boring writing in diary form. If it had been in anything but a diary form. it would have gotten at least 3 star's if they took the time to truly write it in first person it would be alot better.
the chapter it's not loading up at all from this chapter to the most recent one.