Thanks so much! I'm glad to hear what you have to say about the pacing, I'm trying to take this story a little slower and go over things in more detail, but I was worried some people may not enjoy the slow pace.
ch 0 2 System Explanation
Video Games · Firehawk81
This world isn't all sunshine and rainbows, the mc just doesn't realise it yet.
I was by no means an expert on Pokemon, I couldn't battle competitively for the life of me and had fallen off of playing the games as much as I used to, only buying the latest one and then playing through it once before returning to other things. Still, that didn't mean I wasn't happy to be reborn in the pokemon world. In fact, I was ecstatic. A world of mystical creatures that you can command in battle and will also probably be the best friends you'll ever have? Sign me right up! It was probably one of the safest worlds you could be put into, only beat by shows for literal toddlers. Much better than some crazy shit like Worm or DC.
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Thank you!
ch 0 1 The Beginning of the Beginning
Video Games · Firehawk81
I agree but to be honest if I was really going to drop it I would have never made another post, as its been so long since the last chapter, I wouldn't want to get people's hopes up. Although it will be a long while before I come back to this story as I want it to be great. I want to get more experience with my new story, because although I will put plenty of time in effort into my new story, this story is my brainchild and something I really enjoyed writing, and wish to make as good as possible.
ch 21 Going Foward
Anime & Comics · Firehawk81
Mou can't teleport others for the same reason the MC can't.
Its would be the same reason mc can't teleport them. To teleport someone else you have to be able to access their psychic energy and "drag" it with yours which isn't possible due to their core completely blocking most peoples psychic energy's off. If the others were even just budding psychic's mc could teleport one other because he would also have to stop their momentum. Also Moy can't learn teleport. I have pokemon learn a lot of moves they normally can't, which you will be seeing soon with more battles coming up, but teleport is a very rare move in this universe that only a few pokemon can learn.
He would take the other passengers with him if he could, even if he didn't like them he wasn't heartless, but sadly just like how psychics couldn't mind read or control others if their core hadn't broken, neither could they teleport others.
Anime & Comics · Firehawk81
The flight won't be long enough where they have to release their pokemon. The size will defintly draw attention.
ch 19 Saying Goodbye
Anime & Comics · Firehawk81
There now.
Coming out of his musings he was shocked as he saw the white light fade. In front of them was a massive rock crab Meta, about double the size as she was as a crustle. It was low to the ground and an almost pitch black color with two stubby claws, better for defending than pinching. It had an extra pair of legs than the usual Mantor with six in total, plus it was much more crab like, with a more round than long body.
Anime & Comics · Firehawk81
Found this but completly forgot to put it here. The longer claw is like the shorter one.
Coming out of his musings he was shocked as he saw the white light fade. In front of them was a massive rock crab Meta, about double the size as she was as a crustle. It was low to the ground and an almost pitch black color with two stubby claws, better for defending than pinching. It had an extra pair of legs than the usual Mantor with six in total, plus it was much more crab like, with a more round than long body.
Anime & Comics · Firehawk81
Not a bad idea and actually very similar with an idea I just came up with! It might be something I do in the future when she is a Torterra but she does not currently have the ground typing. Thanks for the idea!
ch 18 New Partner(s?)
Anime & Comics · Firehawk81
I mean eventually but first she has to get to that size which is going to take a long while. At the point every increase in strength is slow so it will be a while. If I had to say she would reach that size by champion level which is still a longs way off. After that she will start growing even bigger, but keep in mind she would also quite literally be becoming a practical god at the same time. Is it so suprising she will get even bigger at that point?. How is she going to get anywhere without destroying everything? I have a couple ideas but we will have to see.
ch 18 New Partner(s?)
Anime & Comics · Firehawk81
Thank you!
ch 0 5 Time Skip
Pokemon Gacha System
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