Bu_M_Bu_Um

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Just a random guy who likes reading ^^

2019-10-18 Joint Belgium
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Bu_M_Bu_Um
Bu_M_Bu_Um
1 days ago
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Annoying but fair...

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And so, for the sake of my peace of mind and my future writing I have decided that there shall now be four chapters a week instead of the previous five, with wednesday no longer getting a chapter.

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Bu_M_Bu_Um
Bu_M_Bu_Um
11 days ago
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Knowing that he was done with creating one skill, Haru decided to go for another one. He would use these two to level up his Gravity Bending, and then, he will use his skill points which exceeded 12 points to level up his Gravity Bending.

Playing as a Bender (Avatar: Last Airbender SI)

Playing as a Bender (Avatar: Last Airbender SI)

TV · blazuki

Bu_M_Bu_Um
Bu_M_Bu_Um
14 days ago
Commented

As I see it, you simplified things a bit too much. First you have to take into account that you are writting about what is basically a crusade between the Prussian and the Faith. The Prussians are militaristic and VERY religious so if you let them go for it, you won't stop them. Second, the Prussians are fighting against maybe 3 kingdoms... The North is dependant on the Prussians and the religion there is the Old gods, not the Faith. The Ironborns worship the Drowned god and would take the chance to rebel. The Reach belong to the Prussians, and Dorne would happilly stab the Lanisters and Baratheons while they are down. Third, if you follow the way of the books a bit, the Lanister fleet is burned down by the Ironborns, and the Redwyne fleet that gives them their first defeat is in the Reach, which belongs to the Prussians who deals with the Ironborns... So, you have a vast and slow North who'll need to deal with the Ironborns and would surely not want to go to war for the Faith, the Ironborns reaving to their pleasure, the Westerlands stuck between 2 wars ( Ironborns and Prussians ), Dorne who could make a coup for the Targaryen, and the Prussians raring to go DEUS VULT on the less armed, less trained, maybe even numbered pagans...

Bu_M_Bu_Um
Bu_M_Bu_Um
19 days ago
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As they approach from the front of the ship, a hissing sound explodes, and a tongue of white fire burns the small folk, it catches on the houses around as well, and the fire spread faster than a cut can bleed, I see from the top of the wall my house guard, and my family leave the keep in a single line to the ship, I try to scream but nothing comes out, I try to move from the battlements but my feet sink into the stone.

a game of thrones and magic

a game of thrones and magic

TV · XAkarrinX

Bu_M_Bu_Um
Bu_M_Bu_Um
20 days ago
Commented

mon chéri

A happy tear came to her eye, and she smiled warmly down at him. "Je t'aime aussi, ma chérie," she whispered back.

Harry Potter and the Champions

Harry Potter and the Champions

Book&Literature · Ace_18_

Bu_M_Bu_Um
Bu_M_Bu_Um
21 days ago
Commented

info dump

Also add that chapters of what happens in essos will be few or only information that reaches mc.

Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)

Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)

TV · Chill_ean_GUY

Bu_M_Bu_Um
Bu_M_Bu_Um
21 days ago
Commented

annotation please

My question is if you want me to make new chapters of the summer islands trip adding the stark men and some characters from the reach or just make an annotation after a time jump.

Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)

Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)

TV · Chill_ean_GUY

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Bu_M_Bu_Um
21 days ago
Posted

You, my man, have written a very funny story. You just made my day with it. I am anticipating the following chapters very much.

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Bu_M_Bu_Um
Bu_M_Bu_Um
22 days ago
Replied to mubarak272

you forgot the conqueror's haki

"Hey, not only is he a monster in Conqueror's Haki, but also the Conqueror's Haki, but also the Conqueror's Haki. 

ONE PIECE: The Strongest Vice Captain of Blackbeard Pirates

ONE PIECE: The Strongest Vice Captain of Blackbeard Pirates

Anime & Comics · Truelord_Taverius

Bu_M_Bu_Um
Bu_M_Bu_Um
26 days ago
Commented

Désolée Gabrielle, il est là pour moi. Mais je peux te le prêter de temps en temps si tu veux.

"She wants to know if she can keep you," she grinned at him, causing him to blush. And then her gaze shifted to Gabrielle and her grin turned evil. "Désolé, Gabrielle, il est à moi, mais je vous laisse lui emprunter de temps en temps si vous voulez."

Harry Potter and the Champions

Harry Potter and the Champions

Book&Literature · Ace_18_