Comes of this—> comes out of this
It would be foolish to disregard anything that comes of this quiet man's mouth.
Queen of the Castaway Isle
Horror · CCmei
learned long by now—> long since learned
He's learned long by now to just not think too hard when it comes to Sophie. Her motives, her means. She's always been something of a wildcard behind the most gentle poker face and since the day before their flight, she's only gotten far worse.
Queen of the Castaway Isle
Horror · CCmei
came a man sophie didnt recognize—> called a man sophie didnt recognize
"What the hell is going on here!?" came a man Sophie does not recognize.
Queen of the Castaway Isle
Horror · CCmei
Thanks for the chapter
Thanks for the chapter worth the wait as always I pointed out some typos and whatnot that i spotted while reading I love the little glimpses into sophies insanity even while it seems everything is great and almost as if they are all normal
when out—>went out
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Queen of the Castaway Isle
Horror · CCmei
I actually know someone in real life who would wear sunglasses in weather like that
Even though it was raining cats and dogs, with the skies already dark, he was still wearing sunglasses underneath it all. There was no need for it other than to attempt to look cool or to comfortably hide the haggard dead tired look everyone was rocking lately.
Queen of the Castaway Isle
Horror · CCmei
not sure what munaly is supposed to be since i dont know any similar word that would fit
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Queen of the Castaway Isle
Horror · CCmei
heaviest of pours—> heaviest of downpours
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Queen of the Castaway Isle
Horror · CCmei
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original Well i cant write i tried but i give up
44 was never anything more than a slave for testing poison but one day she is discarded and finds a lifetime of being filled with poison may have some advantages3 Chs 3 Collections
Thanks for the chapter
Son of the Spirit Beast
Eastern · NagatoSaitou