is this paragraph necessary? i didn't see any meaning of adding it here. And it does not do much in the sense of giving life to the character..
Ravichandra quickly nodded, offering a small bow, before exiting the room with purpose. His next tasks were clear: to dispatch the pamphlet to Raya Printing Services and to reach out to the Minister of Health of the empire.
Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
History · Mithun_ReddyGaru
yay... you should have all of your friends in this business.. i will lap up everything you put out...
P.S. Check Out the Novel of a Friend, HOE38, Heir of an Empire: 1538 India.
Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
History · Mithun_ReddyGaru
didn't the food disappear when the owls came with mails??
"YOU..." Sirius angrily threw a piece of chicken at Magnus, but he caught it and started eating.
Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]
Book&Literature · MisterImmortal
At near light speed propulsion, it will much harder, almost impossible to attack physically With energy beams or something like that. If you are at near light speed and throw an object/particle forward at a considerable fraction of light speed, it won't just cross the light speed barrier. And iits impossible to catch upto a spaceship moving at near light speed, even if it begins moving 0.001 sec earlier than you. At light speed, everything is just stationary and white-ish. As even light can't reach you. And you say they need to evade attacks at near light speed propulsion? Its impossible. Following the sci-fi logic used in this novel.
A traction control module was essential when going up against spaceships capable of achieving high speeds. Such spaceships would have near light-speed propulsion power, able to rely on its superb mobility to evade attacks and retaliate against their targets easily. Just like an annoying fly buzzing around, even if they were unable to defeat their targets, they could most definitely leave them annoyed to death.
Super Gene Optimization Fluid
Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
Hope my review helps and you atleast consider it. Peace.
to be more precise, the intense sensation one has in the middle of a fight, is often broken by mindless explanation. And even they are not clear and precise at all. So the momentum and flow of the fight scenes keep breaking. its difficult to read it without having to read it twice or thrice. i often have to ignore one two paragraphs just to keep the flow. But alas, its irritating doing that, when its supposed to be effortless. The troubling part is the essence of the fight scenes, namely, kicks, stabs, ducking, summer sault. punch, sword strikes, dodge, usage of different abilities like fire fusion, fireball, dark matter etc, they are all explained in a bland manner. Like we are watching cartoons, not animes. Secondly, there are obvious misses the mc does while doing things, fighting, going about day to day life. Every other character for that matter. They are not behaving as per their standard. I mean , i understand the MC hail from a primitive age, but with enough adversities, even a dumb changes his ways, becomes wise and alert. Their thinking changes. The weak-to-strong loses its meaning , if all that is happening is his level increases, but his mentality doesn't transform and becomes sharp after all thta training. And it becomes very obvious and cliche when MC keeps getting low standards in his talent, luck, fights. when even the wise instructors 'choose' to ignore such obvious improvements. Like everything stacks against the MC and somehow he breaks through all that. But still that doesn't change his personality. In short, character depth is absent here. which is the most appealing thing about a story. It might not be obvious at first. But as i read along more and more chapters, it became irritating to continue reading it. On the one hand, the world background and story is good, but the essense is poor and hard to read. So you can't help but drop it.
maybe enemies are among the chefs.
The crew on the Storm Goddess was abnormally nervous as they gathered on the deck. All of them wished to witness the miraculous moment, even the chefs were here too.
Super Gene Optimization Fluid
Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
i will hang myself , if author introduces interspatial rings later in the story.!! im serious.
After reaching the medicinal ingredients market, Phantom's chronic splurging problem started acting up again. He immediately purchased two sets of concoction devices and gave the glorified reason that one was for regular usage while the other was a spare.
Super Gene Optimization Fluid
Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
'Who scolded me?'
Super Gene Optimization Fluid
Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
Wow. What a find. I have read all the chapters, 10 as of yet. The design is good, to say the least. Grammar is consistent. Although not much is seen yet in the character development department, they are still well thought out. 4.8 stars for this budding author.
Magneto in Naruto
Anime & Comics · rorschach