young man ?, isn't he an adult?
A young man materialized in a green and lush forest, dressed in a white shirt, neatly paired with a black tie and tailored black pants, his attire starkly contrasting his surroundings.
Fantasy · DoubleHush
we shall Witness your Endeavour 😌😌
Sylas smiled. "Even if I die, I'm sure I'll see something interesting first."
Fantasy · Awespec
thé most unrealistic thing IS him feeding human arm like if it's normal
ok what's with Jason going suddenly psychopath curring a body and all?
damn those runny jokes on anime and all are thé best 🤣
The rest is obvious, except for Zach who begged to be... Zero. When I asked him he started acting all mysterious. I know that phase because I lived it before in my youth. It was a dark time in my life, known only as... The Edge Lord Saga Part II.
Action · KalamityAllTaken
the fight felt realistic for a normal people trying to fight to stay alive so a + for me
whose speeking right now?, it's so confusing !!!
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Sci-fi · dreamy_charcoal
i was unable to understand anything from the conversation it doesn't mâles any sense , sometime we know whose speeking sometime we don't you use coma AT thé start of a conversation but forget to use another one once the caractère finish talking. And i can't make sensé or what th MC is talking about when he's thinking or talking since you use or not coma " " , depending on hiw you feel and it makes it impossible to want to read even if it looks interresting. I skipped most or the whole chapter since it was so much of a headache to understand what was happening, with Time laps and all that
still thé sale mistake with thé she/her, trying re-reading After translating and Ask yourself if it's feel normal
this IS all lie!!!, i'm still not richhh!!
Apocalypse After School
Fantasy · BeniBeni