Why does ever person know sign language. I understand why the royal family and monks and castle staff know it but this is getting outrageous. Why should a clothing store shop keeper know sign language?
Pronoea nodded with a smile, "Good, come I will charge you fairly."
Valerian, The Legendary
Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH
He honestly feels way too communicative for how his character was portrayed. Animal speak I get. But I imagine in my head that he would be a man of few words to most humans.
Valerian cast him a gaze and using his signs he said, 'I was born as the enemy of this world. The sinful and cursed. I already have a whole town as my enemy, you should queue up.'
Valerian, The Legendary
Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH
GIGACHAD doing tic tok dances while someone is dying
The vine of death slowly sucked away Gloria's blood, as she wailed and begged for mercy. Valerian used his hand to weave her signs, 'Did you ever have mercy on me? You always disrespected my mother and you are the one responsible for her death. Now, you beg for mercy, what was that word you used, bitch?'
Valerian, The Legendary
Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH
My middle name is Valerian. It’ in honor of my grandfather who’s name is Valeriy. That got me baited to read this
We remember. Heavenly demons disciples moto
"[Is that it]?!" Khan shouted in the Niqols' language while the cloud continued to expand. "[Do you only desire destruction for the sake of destruction]?!"
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Quick criticism. Your writing has a lot of holes. I should not be getting some of this information from the comments. You also previously stated in the very first chapter that you forgot to add that th e souls fought for the body therefor the change in personality. I really don’t mind spelling mistakes here or there, but these plot holes are killing me. Also the synopsis is confusing. You stated that he reincarnated in earth but then without explaining anything stated that the mc was in another world different from earth without any “bridge”. In short, your writing is extremely jumpy and confusing. It’ confusing not because you cant write but because you leave out extremely vital information witch leaves holes.
[I am an evolved system. For some reason, you were deemed Worthy enough and got two systems, one from the four ancestral systems and another from the rest which together made me (◠‿◕)] the voice said cheekily.
In a mage world
Fantasy · Vee_High
The self confidence! I love it.
+ 1. imma complain a little. Can we open some of the male characters a little more. I would like to know more about them bc at this point this novel feels borderline harem. Most male characters besides the ones on Nits feel like them come and they go. NPC type characters. Rodney really pulling his weight in Milia 222 for all the men out there. Bc I felt like the milia 222 arc felt like a big beach episode in anime
You are a literal pepega for thinking that. Even in our world where we have no magic, statistics show that twins who have a healthy relationship and grew up together are incredibly efficient at working with eachother. Considering that the world they live in is a magical world, a mind link isent something incredible. And yes, there is a theory that a hive mind is far more capable of learning than a single mind. So shut the f up with your dumb ideas. You are literally reading probably one of the most cliche novels on this site and are mad at me for pointing out obviously dumb idea like telling others that you are not from this world.
The twins then looked at the silent Juri and Alanda. Whatever they say will decide their future.
Death... and me
Fantasy · Suiyan
This is a dumb ideas more than a smart one
'You displayed that the city palace now has two mages, both very strong. This is to show force to the outsiders who may try to arouse trouble here.', said the boy.
Valerian, The Legendary
Fantasy · THE_WORDSMITH