Entrail_JI

Yes, then the first hint about the truth is at chapter 300

No, please. Don't delete review. I appreciate honest feedback and don't get hurt by it. So if you have read Tapov, you understand that I like to plan far ahead with small details. There's no such thing as random. (sometimes) --> I added it exactly after a certain moment because that was when it needed to be added. I don't know if you made it exactly to 300, but in that chapter you get a better idea. --> The system just gave Julien a clear goal instead of before. He wanted to save Leon because he didn't know what to do. He was going blandly in the world. The system gave him that goal to strive for which is why he started changing then. Anything outside of Quest was irrelevant. --> Regarding XP, its not that I ignored it, but its mainly due to the fact that it was mainly Academy stuff. He didn't face that many monsters to begin with. When he does he gains XP, and even then, its like MMORPG's. You need to kill quite a few to level up. And the reason why he gains XP is also related to a future plot point that I've just revealed recently.

Hi, thank you for the message. I see what the problem is. It's all a misunderstanding. Let me explain to you so you can have a better idea. 1) "If I remember currently it all started after after the incident where Leon was about to killed by the tire-3 Professor, who was he again, blake or something. Ya fk that." --> Yes, so Julien becoming the Black Star hindered Leon's progression and resources, which as a result created a scenario where he couldn't fight against professor. (Butterfly effect) 2) "But as soon as The system appeared Julian forgot all those thing, he needed the system to remind him, at least that's how you wrote it." --> No, he never forgot. He just didn't really care. From the start, I made it obvious that he never read the story, and as a result, doesn't care at all about its progression. All he wants to do is become stronger to find a way back. This has been highlighted many times. 3) "Delilah said that the current Julian is Dangerous since he got stronger, he can anyone with his emotion ability, since he got a big boost in his emotion ability, but in the summit arc where Leon was fighting some multi-handed monster bastard, Julian's thought in the side line where, can I beat him?" --> So, the issue here is that you are looking at it from Delilah's POV instead of Julien's. She knows he's very strong, but does Julien share the same POV as her? The answer is no. After looking at Leon he starts questioning whether Leon is stronger than him or not. Does him questioning if Leon is stronger means he's weaker? No, the answer is no. In fact, if you read rigth after, you can see this... ["Can I beat him?" After everything that I had experienced, I thought that I had come close to his level, but seeing him right now, I started to second-guess myself. Indeed, although I had been constantly improving, Leon was the same. Unlike me, he didn't have to torture himself to become stronger. He was extremely talented, to begin with, and the scene presented before my very eyes served to confirm such thoughts. But still. "It's not impossible."] As you can see, Julien is just questioning if he can beat Leon. He isn't saying he's weaker. Unless the two fight, it would be hard to tell in his mind. Well, there you go. I believe I have resolved most of the issues that mostly came from misunderstandings. I believe that since you're reading so much at once you're missing out on a lot of small details that I have brought in advance, and forgetting that people have different POV's. Just because Delilah thinks something, doesn't mean Julien needs to think the same even if his thoughts may be wrong. If you have more issues, bring them up to me and I believe I can easily resolve them as well. It's all in the details that may be missed.

Hi, thank you for review. I have planned this story quite thoroughly and have notes made for quite a while. Can you please tell me what the plot holes are and where I forget parts? I know there may be some plot holes but I never really forget what I write in previous chapters. If you could show me examples it would help.