Better change your attitude asap or else this story won’t be worth the reading
He felt like a retard; even after having such great power in his hands, he still got beaten up?
Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Yeah, although the author is not doing a gramatical error, just say ”i am or it’s me even MC’s name speaking” would be better.
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Comprehension Ability: Creating and teaching the Dao in various worlds
Eastern · It's not Sunday
It is such waste of money and time just to read these repetitive sentences over again gahhh!!!
Hm way too long being weak
Cultivating for ten years, today he finally broke through to the Post-Natal Eighth Level!
Immortality: My cultivation Has No Bottleneck
Eastern · The Old Chicken Eats Mushrooms
The story’s development is extremely lacking. It’s all about MC’s daily activity which not necessarily needed. Don’t you think that it’s better for the MC’s to focus on his journey on how to cultivate than to repeatedly doing his useless activities? It is alright to have one or two sentences of enjoying life. But what exactly is this novel talking about?
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Immortality: My cultivation Has No Bottleneck
Eastern · The Old Chicken Eats Mushrooms
Bored
Of course, Liang Sheng would never reveal his true strength. Only a fool would give up living such a rich and carefree life unnoticed.
Immortality: My cultivation Has No Bottleneck
Eastern · The Old Chicken Eats Mushrooms
Sorry to say,, from what i’ve read so far, it is such a disappointing story. The flow is way too rash, no story and character building. I was shocked when i read it. I found no exact rhythm which i wish it would be there. And.,(sigh).,,,(speechless) but.,anyway keep going on writing more story, improve the writing quality and stuff then I’m sure it won’t be the same with this novel.
He named the armor Coconut Armor, and this saber as Bloody-Handed Human Slaughter.
Game Descends: All The Skills I Have Are Boss Skills
Games · Return
The new released chapters after 188 couldn’t be opend, seems there is something wrong? Some body explain this please
My Brother's the Protagonist? Good Thing I Awakened My System!
Eastern · EternalZenith