SauceofSucess

SauceofSucess

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Just a nerd that likes to read.

2019-06-23 Joint United States
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SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
21 days ago
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Has Apache's name been changed? It's been wrong for quite a few chapters.

Her plan was to gather intelligence in Lania Kaia once her four main attributes exceeded 100. She couldn't completely trust the Bureau's intel, given Hecipah's warning that Blue Star disguises were riddled with flaws visible to high-level beings. 

This Life, I Will Be the Protagonist

This Life, I Will Be the Protagonist

Games · Catlove12Fish

SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
23 days ago
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The item names in this chapter have had an odd repetition of Lania Kaia

SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
23 days ago
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There seems to be text missing, where the scene from the previous chapter doesn't logically lead to this opening scene.

Shadow.Q spoke plainly: "Although we can't kill you, we can certainly lock you up."

This Life, I Will Be the Protagonist

This Life, I Will Be the Protagonist

Games · Catlove12Fish

SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
23 days ago
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This section is a repeat.

SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
1 months ago
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The writing quality for the part couple of chapters has sharply declined. The MCs named has been misspelled and several paragraphs have been gibberish. I've been enjoying this novel so I hope the quality is improved.

SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
1 months ago
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There were multiple instances of incorrect names and paragraphs that were unreadable.

SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
1 months ago
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Some of the paragraphs are out of order.

SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
9 months ago
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In real life, if someone is having a seizure don't force their mouth open and put something in it. You're more likely to hurt then help

Just as the crowd was about to step forward and interfere, an experienced old man immediately stepped forward and said loudly, "If you don't know, then don't talk nonsense. Guobao is having an epileptic seizure, this girl is trying to save him, if not handled well this disease could be fatal! You people need to back off, don't get in the way of her trying to save someone!"

Rebirth of a Village Girl

Rebirth of a Village Girl

General · Bong Five

SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
9 months ago
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Incomplete sentence

SauceofSucess
SauceofSucess
9 months ago
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This is an incomplete sentence