need some training arc
What do you think of the protagonist?
Anime & Comics · David_Arenas
it has avery good flow so far
What do you like most about the fanfic?
Anime & Comics · David_Arenas
yes
• No, you marking who says what helps us follow the scene better.
Anime & Comics · David_Arenas
yes this one
• It's okay, but we wouldn't mind something more OC either.
Anime & Comics · David_Arenas
fight him and die
it's good as it is
• An appropriate length.
Anime & Comics · David_Arenas
The phrase "Tsuki ga kirei desu ne?" just popped in my head 🤣🤣
We would hunt demons during the night as well and it became a lovely bonding time between us. It was times we spent under the moon that I would remember forever.
Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn
Gun Breathing
So, that's how I learned the basic breathing style. I called it, Steroid breathing (because it's true and funny). Everything you need to know is in the name.
Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn
the Chrollo
"By the way, Machi, in the past, when contacting the people in Meteor City, the Chrollo would come forward, or I would come. Why did you suddenly want to come along?"
Anime & Comics · 0StolenDream0
take yo time
MHA: GAMER PATH
Anime & Comics · Jovami6729