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The story is good, but when will you write it further. all the other ones are also halted in the middle as well.

the story is good and the idea about the revolution from the scratch by feeling the same difficulties as the masses felt them is very good and the story development is pretty good, as it has the different pov and thoughts to support the idea reflected in the story. Good fanfic to read.

good story development and writing is good as there are no language mistakes.

so far the writing is good and world background was kept in mystery as complete details were not shown, but the structure around it was well built and layered by later the details are showing. MC walks on the path of OPness from ground and has a good mentality so far.

very good start, like his straight forward personality, don't make him bend the knee by being soft on Konoha hypocrite.

the quality is good and story development progresses so far shows the potential it have.

the story is good, it is developing in a new view. just do not make everything seem to follow the original storyline, and the MC should not have the wait and see approach to get the plotline. it's good. keep it up the work.

it's good. Just keep it going, the flow feels natural, without any additional rendition in the story line so far. it's going through its own pace.

Man, the novel is mix between marvel and cultivation, its okay but please even if you translated it through MTL, didn't you at least read it yourself before posting it man, the meaning of the work completely lost in the transition man, pls check it and post it.