😂😂😂😂YESS!! THAT'S THE REACTION I WANTED!!
"INCINERATION-MAXIMUM!!"
Fantasy · Rowan_Eternal
oop😬😬
Ikaris cast her skill against Dr'ul throwing her off balance as she was suddenly flipped upside down, but she had expected such a move and immediately countered with a downward kick towards Dina's head, though her vision blurred when she was hit with [Inversion] multiple times in one place causing her to flip and teleport without moving an inch throwing her senses off completely before Dina's hand pressed on her exposed stomach and heat she had never expected began pushing against her flesh.
Fantasy · Rowan_Eternal
How did I not see this??😂😂😂
There was no trigger, there were no tells or gestures, the elf was casting the technique without words or circles and it made her hard to predict as it quickly became a game of "tag" with Dr'ul becoming restless and impatient when she realised that Arla's combined technique with godspeed made her almost impossible to touch while she used them in tandem, and then on het last grab after Arla vanished and Dr'ul spun to try catching her again she was met with Dina's image holding on to Arla's hand.
Fantasy · Rowan_Eternal
I mean...
[I have long wanted to battle against a god, but would you know the pantheon has never once had a dispute, they fear war, they all fear me!] Dr'ul looked at her sister who seemed terribly uncomfortable being in her presence when she was like this. [But Sol, he made my hand tremble after two swings of my sword, and he dared to call me by name, he has promised me a fight and I am estatic, I am intrigued!] Dr'ul laughed while her cheeks reddened even more.
Fantasy · Rowan_Eternal
Thanks for bringing this chapter to my attention... typo's must perish to editing
[How dare he reject my good-willed invitation?] She clasped all four of her fists and stepped forward, grabbing the system window as of it was a TV. [I even went the extraile and spent points to purchase privacy rights!] She seemed on the verge of exploding with anger.
Fantasy · Rowan_Eternal
The story is interesting so far, I do think you need to revise your grammar, but congrats on working up the courage to publish at all, many never will! Keep at it.
Fair
[Skill: Lightspeed{Limited:1 use every 2 days}]
Fantasy · SilenceSilence
Evolving in the middle of a fight is tight
[Skill Evolution: Lightspeed]
Fantasy · SilenceSilence
Shii's at stake
"I will not disappoint sir."
Fantasy · SilenceSilence
aye
"Tarnished Warrior of outer-world, I challenge you to a duel to the death." The stone golem stood from the throne and began walking toward Sol.
The World's most Overpowered Side-Character
Fantasy · Rowan_Eternal