Neqtrix

Neqtrix

male LV 4

I like the 'fight' between science and magic

2019-04-19 Joint Romania
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Neqtrix
Neqtrix
1 years ago
Replied to Daoistwaterdrop

Thank you for your kind words. As for your question, I do not know as of yet. Right now, I am building up the story until I reveal the first romantic interest. From thereon, I'll see whether I will include more FMCs.

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Neqtrix
1 years ago
Posted

If you stumble across this novel, just like I did, I can only tell you to give the story a shot. The novel starts off with quite the dark settings and you can feel the dread and despair just by reading the chapters. WIth all that said, let's get into the meat of this review. CHARACTERS: In the first 20 chapters the character number is low and they are mostly side-kicks. As for the MC he is roughly fleshed out. You can get a basic idea of what and how he is, bit there is a lot of room to evolve in the future. WORLDBUILDING: We don't know much about this world, but it is some kind of blend between our world and a fantasy world (Note: this is the starting world) As for the pace of the strory, it starts off pretty slowly, but ramps up after chapter 17ish. All in all, a good novel if you want to follow a MC that isn't just an ice-cold, arrogant young Master that is perfect in every little thing.

Neqtrix
Neqtrix
1 years ago
Replied to LazyAngel

I'll eagerly follow the story until then. Can't wait to see the world you have in mind :) On another note, please don't feel discouraged if it seems like the story doesn't get any traction. The few of us that are here will follow through with the story.

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Neqtrix
1 years ago
Commented

This is pretty good, ngl. The pace is nice, though a bit slow for my taste, and the writing is varied and rich. Keep up the good work.

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Neqtrix
2 years ago
Commented

Hey Vsauce, Michael here.

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Neqtrix
2 years ago
Replied to AnAxeToGrind

the author didn't delete yours, though

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Neqtrix
2 years ago
Replied to Solomon369

it's possible, through the canales that connect the ears with the back of the throat

"I…" Lionel voice was lost in a gurgle of blood. "… Just wanted to see my mother…"

Dimensional Descent

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

Neqtrix
Neqtrix
2 years ago
Replied to mistermoon

was some guy on pinterest. in the original art, the guy had pants,I just cropped it to fit

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Neqtrix
2 years ago
Commented

Stay safe man. It's better to be healthy than to follow a stupid schedule if it's impacting your well being.

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Neqtrix
2 years ago
Replied to SkyLq

the author reads all coments on his works, this is why I posted this. I'm too lazy to tell him this on his server

At that moment, Supreme Monet sat in silent meditation on a large bed. She wore a silk lace gown, defining her curves. Despite the faint wrinkles on her face, she still had a stifling, captivating beauty that could cause the hearts of men to boil.

Dimensional Descent

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

  • Nozim's Legacy: A Shattered Heritage original

    Nozim's Legacy: A Shattered Heritage

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE MAGIC CULTIVATION

    They say powerful families eventually become core pillars of any kingdom and empire, that eventually, they would grow so powerful they would become impenetrable to outside forces. And yet, one such behemoth fell to a mere surprise attack. How? These were Alex's thoughts for as long as he ran from his falling family. Shoved into a carriage and separated from his parents, forced to leave his home and start anew inside a mere kingdom. Hunger forced his hand, making him turn to a place that welcomed him. A place that doubles as a home for orphans, for those unwanted, and for those sold by their parents for a bit more coin ...and a slaughterhouse for a lot of these poor souls. Hello readers. Author here. I feel the need to write my thoughts here so there won't be any problems further down the line. What I want to write is a mostly pure-Fantasy novel, so don't expect the MC to be the absolute best in everything he does, says, or thinks, at least for the starting bit. I am still trying to make heads or tails about this novel after all. In any case, that would be a long way off. The world I envision is a bit dark, and I plan to tackle some more mature themes if I get the chance. So, with that said, I don't want to read a 1-star or 2-star review of some kid who got into my novel expecting to get a quick dose of dopamine and receive little in return. The novel is going to be a slow burner, and your job as readers will be to pick it apart, piece by piece. Look forward to missing links, unfinished storylines, and potential plot twists. Feel free to comment wherever you want. I love talking with you, the readers, about the future of this story and where it could go next. It's as fun for me to write it as it is for you to enjoy reading it. I am from Europe, so English is not my first language, which is why I wholeheartedly accept constructive criticism, a rare breed of reviews here. If you notice that I make the same mistake twice, a grammatical one for example, I would rather you tell me the correct way to use it than just shrug it off and say, "Grammar bad". If you want something else from what is going on here, even though my work may not be the most unique one out there, I hope you will give it a try. Oh? You're still reading this? In that case, you may receive a snippet of more information about our favourite and perfect (Sarcasm) MC. "Where are you from, kid?" Asked a grizzled old man, looking at a tired and wet boy no older than eight. "I seek shelter, mister." The boy responded weakly, trying his hardest not to faint on the spot. "This is no shelter, boy. If you want to rest, try your luck elsewhere." The man shook his head. He tried closing the door but the kid shoved his hand to prevent it. Ignoring the blinding pain in his arm, the boy pleaded. "I know you take in kids like me. Please." The boy begged, the strength in his legs starting to give out. The old man clicked his tongue. "We kill kids, boy." "Some survive. Please." The boy passed out.

    69 Chs 12 Collections

  • TTNL-DROPPED original

    TTNL-DROPPED

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE CULTIVATION

    THIS NOVEL IS DROPPED!!! I decided to redo the novel as a whole and is now under the name of Nozim's Legacy: A Shattered Heritage

    1 Chs 389 Collections