But isn't his reaction to meeting Arthur then strange, I mean he apparently does remenmber Arthur considering he hates him so much and when Arthur first appeared the MC said 'it was he a voice he didn't want to hear again' or something like that. I mean I am not opposed to introducing Arthur to the story (after all It's still your story) and the Player Manwha is cool as heck, it's just that I it seemed a bit inconsistent with the backgzround of the MC having already some supernatural experiences and his reaction to transmigration and his meeting with the strange being that transmigrated him. Of course if he didn't remenmber Arthur in like he doesn't remember anything supernatural ever happening than it would probably be ok. Now this is more personal preference, I would have found it cooler if he still had his memories and didn't take Ichigos power and the Omnitrix but got an Ego weapon instedad (and maybe some other characters power). The concept of the Omnitrix in stories is also something I look at with caution considering it's inconsistent power levels, I mean if somebody had the fully unlocked Omnitrix, there would be no more point in choosing any lower level Alien, I mean Alien X is OP but there is the drawback that it's really difificult to get it to do anything, but there is no point choosing any weak alien, exept mabe the one species Azmuth is from for it's IQ. My point being, while I think the Omnitrix only useful depending on the universe the user is in (except Alien X) so choosing it is never really smart if you don't know the universe you are going...
For one his denial after he transmigrated or even him thinking evzerything was a dream. That reaction doesn't make much sense to me. Second is his apparent lack of combat experience. From Arthurs words it can be seen that he should have fought many battles in the past not to mention in the second chapter (or first?) it was said that the MC gained Ichigos memories. Considering all of that I find his struggle in the first challenge a bit weird and generally his fight give (at least to me) the impression that .he is very inexperienced
The first part of the chapter with Arthur from Player made no sense considering the earlier chapters...
...is he a pedophile or why is he after underage girls?
Also, what are your thoughts on Thalia? Am I going too quick, or do you think it is okay the way it is?
Book&Literature · Ordinary_Measure
Why is he addressing Tang Wulin as "Tang". That doesn't make sense it's his last name and I thought they were supposed to be friends, he should address him as "Wulin"
Nope you are right the ending of the last chapter and this chapter are not properly connected
So you always write the MC using his "hands" especially when he was saluting, so does he have his arm back or not?
That's stupid since Jinwoo literally has a skill that recovers lost limbs and since he got Jinwoo's power even temporary he should have regenerated his arm.
Well, the thing with strategy is true but only if the difference in strength isn't too far apart and in this case this fight is, regular vs. irregular not to mention an irregular who beat a ranker who was also a Zahard princess. I get your point, but I think this fight was still portrayed as the MC having to struggle too much against a regular. Maybe he wasn't serious or because of his lack of experience. I mean if I look at one of the more recent fight of Baam against Lilian?, that blonde princess from Lo Pro Bia Family, she was constantly attacking Baam and he only defended but wasn't even struggling and wasn't injured. Even though Lilian(I'ma call her that now) wasn't trained by her Family head she has still climbed the Tower way longer and higher than Rose. To sum it up my problem is not that the MC may struggle against regulars it's that he struggles against them on the TEST FLOOR.
Yeah like Rick did in Rick an Morty in that episode with the dragons
Sirion was inspired. "So, design and engineering. Of course, it's a system of sorts. It didn't make me all-powerful and it doesn't give me the opportunity to pump up my physical skills or magic skills to the divine level, but the very concept of creating things is already a miracle for me! But first, I need to start with something simple to pump up my own skills."
Arcane: Broken Mechanism
Anime & Comics · Jagami28