RavenPrinceMas

Deep breath….wow. Just…wow. Thanks for letting me read this. Sometimes the pacing is irritating, but it’s all worth it. Your ability to make these characters come alive and spiral into emotional interactions with great dialogue that drive this rollercoaster of a plot line to a climactic thrill is amazing.

Thank you! I really enjoyed your story

Glad to have you back! Take your time with recovery!!

Thanks for the journey. I enjoyed it.

Just the laugh I needed. Thanks

Thanks for your hard work!

Thanks for the chapter. Amazing work as usual

You are a good author. While the pacing is currently slow, there is a point to it. Fleshing out the characters and growing their personalities through their interaction and introspection has been great in the past chapters. If you decide to speed up, that’s your choice, but there has been nothing wrong with what you’ve done so far. Thank you!

Rick-rolled and it was enjoyable. One of the most well-written stories I’ve read on this platform. Oh good author, please, can I have some more?

You are more than decent at dialogue. You are great! Many writers can make plot twists that amaze, abilities to astound, and gimmicks to keep a reader interested; however, it takes real talent to give a character life like you do. Your character interactions are incredible, the reactions are never stale or bland whether they are a mainstay or temporary, and give your work an appeal that keeps me waiting for the next update. Thank you for your work.