I have not read the Naruto story yet, but you had some great ideas with this one. The combination of modern inventions and magic beyond the wild imagination of wizards of the time was very welcome. Although the character was a little bland, he served a purpose as someone who knew the darkness of the world already. He served as a very good foil to Harry. I would be very welcome to the idea of a remake of both stories, but please be more mindful of the power creep this time around. He got all those materials a little TOO if I recall correctly. Thanks for asking for my opinion! If you need any help with story stuff/editing, I would be down to help!
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I have not read the Naruto story yet, but you had some great ideas with this one. The combination of modern inventions and magic beyond the wild imagination of wizards of the time was very welcome. Although the character was a little bland, he served a purpose as someone who knew the darkness of the world already. He served as a very good foil to Harry. I would be very welcome to the idea of a remake of both stories, but please be more mindful of the power creep this time around. He got all those materials a little TOO if I recall correctly. Thanks for asking for my opinion! If you need any help with story stuff/editing, I would be down to help!
Alexander Prince - Half Blood Potter
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