is Gavin gay? He gives different vibes at times
this is perfection on a whole new level. good work
he is so shameless toward a clueless girl
I believe its alright to have mysteries to keep readers on the edge. but if u make it more like a puzzle it becomes interesting, esp knowing that with more chapters each puzzle is unearthed. if there are too many mounting mysteries without just one recovery then it becomes more like a dessert. however thank you.
this story has so many ommissions and mystries that it gets too boring to read. the content itself is great buh the FL is too much of a coward who is depicted to be strong it makes one really loose interest. I think those little things need attention and your book will soar
nice
I believe u need a lil work on this paragraph,esp the use of past and present tense.
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My Long Lost Mate
Fantasy · winterdaisy55
Very interesting... More please.
🤣🤣🤣🤣 I'm hooked, I must say
Thane slightly pauses before silently shaking his head and saying "No, you can go. I'll go after you." I nod my head and pull out clean clothes. I can't wait to get out of these things! My poor boobs need to breathe...
The Secret Switch
Fantasy · Blissfullrage
so she just got cheated on n she is now happy? twisted
Fighting Mate
Fantasy · Monachre