Swordguy7

Again why is there a filler chapter. Ok he went to work... so what.

Great first chapter, second chapter I could have skipped. A bunch of dialog that did not matter.

So he was stupid enough to get betrayed, smart enough to escape, but stupid again to use land deeds to get loan to buy potion when he knows he is being scammed. Idiot. Idiot MCs are not entertaining to read about.

Not sure how I feel about a MC that died cause he was an idiot and naive.

So he just sentenced millions of people to death just to give his siblings a very very minor jump start that could have waited 88 more days? bummer, at least he asked his soul AI beforehand

Imo, having over 8 chapters dedicated to other people in the first 50 chapters is way too many.

good but complicated

Idiot for leaving enemies alive.

Can we skip to the part where the loser MC gets beat up?