Webnovel Author: vorlefan - Novel Collection

If you enjoy a nice first-pov story, then I'm sure to recommend this one. The main character is interesting to read his thoughts and how he perceived the word. Also, the introduction and the starting of the game is one of the turning-points that it will get you hooked in. ~ Keep up the good work :)

Thanks for the review :)

What a good review!

Um brasileiro com bom gosto por aqui xD

What a good review!

This novel is new and for that, my review is more a incentive than criticism about the story itself. It has points it needs a few touch to improve, like the writing quality, but it has potential. I like the scenario that resembles a mix of steampunk and that movie Wall-E. Going to return later for a better review. Give it a try, you may like it.

Thanks for the review :)

If you enjoy novel like Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, then you definitely going to like this one, since the author itself is a fan of ORV, and the novel contains references for the novel and other novels too. The only thing I hope the author could improve in the next chapters and even edit the previous one, is the writing quality, since it has some grammar errors. With best regards, vorlefan.

It has the potential to be a interesting story to read! It has a clever MC and a interesting backstory and it seems that the concept of good and evil isn't hard defined, meaning it depends of the winner side of story. Give it a try if you enjoy this kind of story!