FaebyenTheFairy

FaebyenTheFairy

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A Fantasy web novelist (^.^)b I also put my completed works on Amazon for those who wish to support me: amazon.com/author/faebyenthefairy

2018-12-20 Joint United States
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FaebyenTheFairy
FaebyenTheFairy
3 years ago
Replied to Jaxer30

Glad you like it! I'm uploading these as we write them, and do you mean that you want to see Monster Tamers fight alongside their monster? The MC won't be able to for a little while, but I'll see what I can do.

FaebyenTheFairy
FaebyenTheFairy
3 years ago
Replied to Jaxer30

Ummm, what? Elaborate, please.

FaebyenTheFairy
FaebyenTheFairy
3 years ago
Replied to Jaxer30

Many thanks for the review! And I am aware of all those criticisms xD It is, after all, supposed to be a "simple vrmmo story" that I and Raidishier can write chapters of in a day. Raidishier is brand-new to writing fiction so this is just a creative writing exercise for him. Stuff like complex characterization and long and detailed combat is far beyond him. If you want better characterization and combat, check out my other creative writing project "Dark Seas Leading Demise"! The first book is complete at 136,000 words long, the MC is by themselves for most the story, the combat is more detailed, and there are lots of little clues and hints as to the true nature of the world.

FaebyenTheFairy
FaebyenTheFairy
3 years ago
Replied to Jaxer30

Lol I never thought about that, but I'm now putting it into the book! xD One of his future enemies or something is gonna mock him with the name "Radish". Also, thanks for being the first to comment!

  • Three-Star Danger Rating original

    Three-Star Danger Rating

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE COMEDY CULTIVATION

    While withering away in school, Lavan is informed by a nameless Deity that he and several others are soon to be transferred between worlds. Good thing he always paid attention to Deity Survival class. ----- I'll be completely honest: at the time of uploading the first chapter, this is just a pantsed isekai story partly inspired by He Who Fights With Monsters's magic system with only a few chapters, and I don't know how much more I'll write. As always, I have a general idea of where the story will go, but nothing too solid. That's just how I write. Lemme know what you like and dislike.

    5 Chs 1 Collections

  • Authority Fought For -- A Simple VRMMO Story original

    Authority Fought For -- A Simple VRMMO Story

    Games ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM COMEDY

    Raid and his friends finally have the capital to buy full-dive virtual reality capsules and play a VRMMO together. In researching how to play their chosen game--Authority Fought For--Raid discovers that he may have the opportunity to blaze a new trail to power using the least popular Class. Will he succeed? ... Obviously. Anyway, this story is a collaboration project between me and...Raidishier, whom I'm introducing to the world of fantasy fiction writing and named the MC after. This story, as described by the title, is just something simple he and I cooked up in our free time. If you like the story be sure to comment and follow it, because I want this to be his encouragement to get into writing!

    11 Chs 12 Collections

  • Dark Seas Leading Demise original

    Dark Seas Leading Demise

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC

    Terminé

    Having awakened within a forest with little to no memories of her past and being left with the sole task of surviving…what will Kaltyr do? ----------------------------------- If when you're reading this there are only 49 chapters, then for all intents and purposes it's completed. The first 49 chapters are just a prologue, giving a long (135,000+ words) introduction to the main character, the power system, and how she obtained her powers--all within the forest she awoke within. You will not learn why the novel has its name. There are only 5 characters, 1 of which is the MC and only another of which is recurring for a time. I do have plans for future books of the series, but they aren't getting written for a long time because this was just a side project to practice the basics of storytelling and whatnot. I will instead be working on my real projects. This is a slow story that doesn't pander to the audience, but I hope you enjoy it, nonetheless.

    49 Chs 14 Collections

  • Versatile Mage Rewritten (((Discontinued))) original

    Versatile Mage Rewritten (((Discontinued)))

    Urban

    Terminé

    (((HAS SINCE BEEN DISCONTINUED))) Y'know how sometimes when you criticize a story someone asks you, "If you're so good at writing stories, make your own or rewrite it!" Well, I am. DISCLAIMER: Versatile Mage is a novel, anime, and manhua (comic) I do not own and am rewriting simply to practice writing. I have not read the novel, nor watched the anime. I am only rewriting the story of the manhua adaptation with as minimal changes as possible in an attempt to close the massive plot holes, inconsistencies, and unrealistic scenarios which bothered me. Please do not claim I am plagiarizing the original. Think of this as a fan fiction if you need to. Oh yeah, if you want to read the original novel or the manhua, they're both here on Webnovel. Just search "Versatile Mage"

    29 Chs 161 Collections

  • Journey of 365 Days (((Kind of Completed))) original

    Journey of 365 Days (((Kind of Completed)))

    Realistic

    Terminé

    365 days, 365 scenes. Battles among supreme beings. Poems about losing love. Dragons showing mercy. Kids stumbling upon magic. This journey involves my answering of 365 creative writing prompts in a desperate bid to overcome my laziness. The prompts come from https://thinkwritten.com/365-creative-writing-prompts/ and I write one a day. THE SITUATION RIGHT NOW: I've gotten over the majority of my laziness. I'm unlikely to update this much. It's pretty much complete. The novel I'm working on is Dark Seas Leading Demise

    100 Chs 9 Collections

  • Planet Dragunity original

    Planet Dragunity

    Eastern

    Terminé

    Every hundred years on Planet Dragunity essences gather to spawn dragons. As children of the planet, dragons are the strongest race! ________________________________________________ This novel is my submission for the writing prompt contest 58. I'm happy to say that I came up with something that can fit all three keywords! Please enjoy and check out my other novel, We Can Trek It~ Follow my Twitter for (sparse) updates @faebyen ________________________________________________ Many thanks to Alex0224 for making the cover and whoever is the rightful owner of the images used! ________________________________________________ I have since decided to put off working on this novel. There will be no more updates (for a while).

    6 Chs 12 Collections

  • We Can Trek It original

    We Can Trek It

    Fantasy

    Terminé

    [Your only goal is to safely escort the three children across the desert. Achieve it however you can. So as to not get lost, follow the compass.] ________________________________________________ This novel is my submission for the writing prompt contest 57. I'm happy to say that I came up with something that can fit all eight keywords! Please enjoy and check out my other novel, Planet Dragunity~ Follow my Twitter for (sparse) updates @faebyen ________________________________________________ Many thanks to Alex0224 for making the cover and whoever is the rightful owner of the images used! ________________________________________________ I have since decided to put off working on this novel. There will be no more updates (for a while).

    5 Chs 5 Collections

  • Life-Saving Guide original

    Life-Saving Guide

    Fantasy

    Terminé

    The main character is an average high school student on modern Earth that, like everyone else, finds himself face to face with a cultivation system. ________________________________________________ Sorry to say, but I won't be uploading for this until I have a lot, if not all of, the novel written. Follow me on Twitter for (sparse) updates on my novels @faebyen

    2 Chs 5 Collections