rakdos321

thank you for the explanation chapter this is something every fan fic book needs I think

I like the notes for the readers. it looks like it will be a good read if paced correctly. you've got my Patronage for sure .good luck to you and may life keep you in ggod health

not a bad show prehistoric park. also I think you doing a fine story and am interested in reading more of it.

good luck to you . hope you get well soon for your sake the novel be cursed. life is most valuable. one can always start again if alive and well.

well I think they will be rivals first as that as fights are in the predator culture and only strong ones are allowed to pass their genes as it was a tradition from the earlier years of the foundation of the first predator king and all that . so good luck with that I look forward to more of this story

so it mey be an issue if the kamino cloners find an Android and attempt reverse engineering but these are later bidos problems . the goats told him he's a sheltered child lol 😂. but ya if I may ask if you will be adding any of the more outlandish creature or race from the extended universe. I would suggest one of those force vampire things but like use it to hunt a young tribe member or something later and bido is tracking it down in the mean time trying to save one of his clan or something like that or maybe a encounter with a chaotic force sea or whatever they are call. it like a space storm but deadly to force users and there is a unique entity that lives in then. I read one of the comics with it mentioned in it. but ya don't take this as you have to do that stuff but I wanted to show my support and give you more stuff to look up and or use. thank you for the chapter. made my day better

thanks for the chapter. your doing great work

I like the new weapon .ne could even go so far as to say it's lit

be sure to rest and get your vitamins and minerals in you. we can wait till your healthy once more. just be sure to live though it

thanks for the nice chapter