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MRgold1
male LV 13I'm a guy who's new to writing and has a few idea's for stories and I hope that over time I get better at writing/stories ideas and will be able to get a good community who read my story's .
2018-12-09 Joint United Kingdom
fixed it thanks [img=recommend]
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The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
Also the candidates get a skill every 100 years not decade so every 10 years a wave happens and on the 10th you get a skill so 80 years going by as said would be 8 waves and no skill by but another 2 you would get one.
that's the time dilation, which was just for the beginning that over now the only thing that doesn't change is the candidates who will still be physically the same after the game is over. As for the review, I knew this was a problem about 40 chapters in. But I enjoyed writing, so I just went on ahead. Luckily, I can just be lazy and say that 10 years went by, and nothing happened. This is gonna be a big novel that needs a lot of cleaning up. Luckily, some of this stuff won't be around for long. Thanks for reading as well.
I don't know about popularity, maybe because some people do things to increase popularity as I just upload it here and on Royal Road. But as for your review, thank you. I appreciate it, and you should try writing if you want to. I'm not special, and I'm happy with how this novel has gone so far, so just give it a try.
so I a rixis goes out and kills an animal for food every day that no points given put if it makes a big discovery. Or fights a strong monster from outside rixis lands, then it will get points for the hunting side. it's more the risk factor that gets you points.
"So I'm not getting points for them hunting, but killing an enemy or some type of significant research or act gets me them the best amount"-Jack
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
yeah, I'd rather you do. I'm not perfect, and I use grammarly, but some things still slip past, so thank you. If you do, it only makes the work better.
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The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
thanks fixed it 👍
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The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
I have an idea of something like them yes
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original The Game of Evolution
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Jack Darwin and 9 other candidates are taken from earth and have been chosen to compete in The game of Evolution. In which each candidate gets a choice of 1 prime race and 2 minor races to control,command, and evolve. The candidate will all be on the same planet of ludum mundi and will have to fight to survive against the other contestants and the world itself. (Had this idea in my mind thought I'd try it out) Also since there has been problems beacuse of the update I will be uploading under the same name for my profile and story on royal road. https://www.royalroad.com/profile/308429174 Chs 829 Collections
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world of fibre generals
In the World of Fibre Generals there is a multi- government funded projects to create super soldiers with unique abilities.But they don't tell the researchers the true meaning of the project and are told a lie that it's for medical purposes but the government gets what they want but at a price. The cover isn't mine I couldn't find the maker but if they want it taken down or credit I will do so.47 Chs 28 Collections
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kingdom of digital hope (dropped)
In the year 2024 as the world is slowly falling apart from multiple causes many people still ignore it.And hope it gets better over time and hope there government will fix it but the world can't hold together any longer so Jay.Earths chosen human will be given a sytem that will let him transfer to a different world whilst still being able to come back to his own.However he only has 5 years until the world goes into chaos so he has to do the mission given to him by the sytem(save humanity and build a new kingdom to protect your race)17 Chs 4 Collections
I've had a bit of a break and also came up with another idea for another novel, which I think is good. I don't know an exact time, but the new updated version of this should come soon. Thanks for reading
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1