Interesting ending even through it was logical considering he was stronger than everyone else. Bit it ist not very satisfying in regards To Hancock, Yamamoto and Bellamy. Don't misunderstand. I don't a romatic development but something which can provide closure. Otherweise thank you for the story. It was a very enjoyable story for me.
I was not sure how to rate this fanfic. I hate NTR so I should like it but at the same time is seriously depressing. I mean you read about destroyed youth and bitterness in adultlife. It is like seeing a person die again and again and again. But then I watched a video on youtube. He would sit one time in the week imagining his wife/child dead because he wasn´t good enough. And then he would snap out of the imagination but the feelings remain. He than uses all this feelings of anger, sadness, wothlessness, self-hatred... to be a great husband, a great father, a great provider.... What I want to say is take these short stories as a lesson. You this kind of shit of betraying your partner or being disrespectful life somehow find a way to fuck you back. Because if you do it is very likely that what the author is writing is going to happen. Video about the guy who motivates himself by imagining his family dead:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0Bilr7jcCY&list=LL&index=8
Could it be that mixed up the order of chapters? This chapter reads as if he has got past the Dementors while in the last chapter he still worked on the Patronus.
Otome Dori is one of the few where I hate nearly every character. It is also one where I want to punch the MC in the nuts.
Ce chapitre a été supprimé.
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Thanks for the chapter You don't really write how Leylin uses the 'sentient force' he gathers. The most logical for a Magus would be to use it on his ''Magic''. But I rather like the thought that his physical Stats (Vitality, Agility, Strength) also grow with. Especially since he can easily do this with his sentient force.
Why do you only want to strengthen the body, soul, and mind? Why not strengthen magic as well? He will after all go to different worlds. Therefore he should be as powerful as possible.
Welcome back and great chapter. It opens a facet of the magic. That is one of the things which I truly enjoy on your history I wish you stay in good health
As an idea for a for a new Quirk: You can convert sun light or another type of energy in life force. That way you could recharge faster your life force and you can also make stronger quirk "cheaper" by building in that it uses life force as fuel
Great chapter P.S. Dont forget about the skill " Physical Endurance "
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Novel / Donghua Version
BTTH Life Simulator System
Anime & Comics · Kisshot