I really can't understand what made you think it was logical to put info dumps within dialogue. Like this chapter was ridiculous. As a writer, you should want your dialogue to be at least slightly realistic. With all the monologs you have in your story, I'm starting to wonder if you think people actually talk like this. Smh
Honestly, I like your story. I just think that you should probably use grammarly to correct your errors. Like, it shouldn't be 'the Divine King', it should be 'a Divine King'. Also, you're still using divide instead of Divine in some sentences. Hopefully, there's improvement in future chapters.
"How do you plan on dealing with this?" Mu Bingyun inquired. "Lou Changsheng becoming the Divine King is not merely a ceremonial title. Even with your miraculous strength that enables you to fight against those from higher realms, the Divine King is not someone to be trifled with," she added.
Against the Gods: Transcendent
Book&Literature · Translator
You're still putting divide instead of divine in this chapter
So just so I'm understanding: Every person in the fourth dimension has fourth dimension strength? So every person in the ninth dimension, even regular people would have ninth dimension strength?
It's been a while since your last update. Are you dropping this?
I don't get why the author won't use Grammarly. This story would be a much better read if it wasn't in two different tenses and if the grammar was better overall. Seems like the author doesn't care, at least up to this chapter. Hopefully, the author improves his grammar in future chapters because the story is really good.
Don't know how you missed it, or if you just don't care, but this chapter is gibberish.
Thanks, hopefully you continue this. I'm interested in the MC's background. Is he an irregular?
According to the discord, the author died.
Ascension of the Immortal Asura
Fantasy · rRandom