Raspa

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Raspa
Raspa
10 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter! Hope everything goes well!

Raspa
Raspa
1 years ago
Commented

Oh wow! I just realized there was a new chapter! Welcome back! I really enjoyed the story so far and I am happy to see more of it!

Raspa
Raspa
Raspa
1 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter!

Raspa
Raspa
1 years ago
Commented

"kept quiet" not "kept quite"

Raspa
Raspa
1 years ago
Commented

Thank you for the chapter! Happy to see it being updated!

Raspa
Raspa
1 years ago
Commented

"he stared at me", not "I stared at me"

I stared at me in shock. Was it shock? It was kind of hard to tell when he only had one eye. Then, he did something completely unexpected. He hugged me. I smiled and hugged him back. "Okay Rin," he said. 

Naruto: Resilience

Naruto: Resilience

Anime & Comics · MelonChan1205

Raspa
Raspa
1 years ago
Commented

Obito not Obiot

He frowned and stared at your and. I walked up to him and grabbed it. He flinched and tried to pull away. "Stop being depressed!" I declared, "You're squandering your potential. Instead of sitting around moping, you should train harder. That way you can become stronger and protect the people you love. You can avenge Minato-sensei and Obiot. Make them proud…" my voice ended in a whisper. 

Naruto: Resilience

Naruto: Resilience

Anime & Comics · MelonChan1205

Raspa
Raspa
1 years ago
Commented

a crowd of soccer fans? lol

There was a commotion downstairs, as if a crowd of soccer fans had arrived. I left VJ to keep an eye on Ciri and Sweers. I headed downstairs. In the hall were two squads of Trappers, sat at a common table and ordered a beer, but the leaders sat separately and discussed something.

Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team

Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team

Video Games · Abi_Daulen

Raspa
Raspa
1 years ago
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Having a system they will end up being powerful one way or the other, so there is no reason to rush it in my opinion. I would say around or less strong than Tombstone, which should be enough to power lift 6 tons. Even that amount is a lot, and the reason why it's mentioned that Spiderman always pulled his punches or they would be too fatal for regular people.

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