SteveOl

SteveOl

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SteveOl
SteveOl
2 days ago
Replied to Kayky_Alberto

I know I'm not a good writer, but is it really so bad to be compared to MTL?

SteveOl
SteveOl
25 days ago
Commented

I also write, but due to my studies I had to stop. I recommend you to prioritize you personal life and only then write.

SteveOl
SteveOl
1 months ago
Replied to GnomeBob

TF! That's the best idea I've heard!

SteveOl
SteveOl
4 months ago
Commented

Will you introduce elements from TDG?

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SteveOl
SteveOl
5 months ago
Replied to Hemanth_Chandra

You have commented a lot, thank you :D

It was just the usual conversation between two senile friends.

Naruto: Secret organization

Naruto: Secret organization

Anime & Comics · SteveOl

SteveOl
SteveOl
5 months ago
Replied to Hemanth_Chandra

Jejeje Just wait.

Unfortunately, real life is not like the fanfic you read, where the reincarnated person, just because they exist, becomes special and their fate cannot be predicted. From the moment you enter this world you become part of it. You cannot simply fight what can be considered the will of the whole world.

Naruto: Secret organization

Naruto: Secret organization

Anime & Comics · SteveOl

SteveOl
SteveOl
6 months ago
Replied to GoldZero

Yeah, I didn't know how to balance at that time.

The book was quite old, from more than 300 years ago, which is not surprising, even in this day and age you still read things like "the art of war", which is already thousands of years old. What is surprising is that a comic, or manga, is read even in these times, even if only for a niche, which speaks volumes about how famous it was.

Naruto: Secret organization

Naruto: Secret organization

Anime & Comics · SteveOl

SteveOl
SteveOl
SteveOl
7 months ago
Commented

I think it's best to concentrate on the current one. Otherwise, with the little time you have to write, you may leave everyone dissatisfied.

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SteveOl
SteveOl
7 months ago
Posted

Too many falshbacks, It breaks the pace of the story. It's better to advance the story and create a special arc to tell the past of the prota.

  • BTTH: I am not an alchemist original

    BTTH: I am not an alchemist

    Anime & Comics ISEKAI ANIME

    Récemment mis à jour

    Jian An, a young engineer, finds himself in a world where alchemy, used to create powerful pills, albeit reserved to a select few. Using his scientific knowledge, he introduces methods that revolutionize pill-making, threatening the control of the alchemists. His innovation sparks conflict, pitting tradition against progress. As the world plunges into chaos, Jian An must steel his resolve and decide how far he is willing to go to protect his vision.

    3 Chs 52 Collections

  • Naruto: Secret organization original

    Naruto: Secret organization

    Anime & Comics ACTION REINCARNATION COMEDY HAREM ISEKAI ANIME KINGDOMBUILDING NARUTO

    The world is in chaos. Destiny can not be changed. To protect my people, to reach my goals and ambitions, I'll mold the world from the shadows. Jiraiya: I can't believe it! An organization much more powerful than Akatsuki! Danzo: It's over! My dream of being Hokage... Madara: Impossible! This was not part of my plan! -------------------------------------------------------- I think there's no need to explain any further. English is not my primary language, so I'm sorry if you find so many mistakes, even more in the first chapters, I'll try to fix them, it's just that I don't have a lot of free time. This will be what I'd like to call an EU (expanded universe) since I'll be introducing nations and people who were not present in the original story, so if you want something that will be strictly following the original story, then this is not the place where you belong. Also, I apologize in advance for any mistake in the information of the story, It's just too difficult to search for every little piece of data, so if I don't know anything then I'll just change it. Just give me a chance. I hope you enjoy it.

    51 Chs 1.6k Collections

  • UQ HOLDER FINAL original

    UQ HOLDER FINAL

    Anime & Comics ANIME

    Terminé

    This is a fanfic with an alternative ending for the manga UQ Holder. Honestly, I wrote this back in 2018, and it was my first work, so I know it has a LOT of mistakes. Also, the manga was still ongoing back then, so many things don't make sense. I originally wrote this in spanish and I'm translating it with an IA, because it's too embarrassing to reread it. Well, I'll just leave it here to anybody who wants to spend a little of their time.

    14 Chs 5 Collections

  • Organización secreta en el universo de Naruto original

    Organización secreta en el universo de Naruto

    Anime & Comics

    4.43

    Lite, quien alcanzó la cima del poder en su vida pasada. Lite, un bebé normal con recuerdos que nunca debió tener. Un mundo cruel donde la vida y la muerte dependen de los fuertes. Dos ideologías chocan. "Cambiaré el mundo desde las sombras".

    38 Chs 101 Collections