062266bb

3 years ago

Commented

Arthure is an asshole for whatever reason he's like that. If I see at any point that Esther forgives his. I think I would stop reading this story. Otherwise thank you for the chapter.

ch 30 Arthur was Wronged!

CEO Daddy, Let's Get Mommy

Urban · priyabolagani

062266bb

3 years ago

Posted

Sorry if there are any mistakes, english is not my mother tongue. Otherwise I really like this story. I like that the LF is badass, her character (brittle but strong), that she has a loving family. I also like the LM, I find it has a well-developed personality. What I dislike that there are too many characters, personally I have not yet remembered all the names of the family. I also find that there is not enough villain at the height of the LF and the LM, even his uncle and his cousin I have the impression that they will quickly be resolved.