Just re-read this. Still amazing! Please come back?
Thanks for the chapter though :D
Nooo you cant leave it like that.
This started off good but didn’t particularly stand out, but as the story developed further everything started fleshing out, and you started to characters underlying motivations i got sucked in, and I really, really want to see where’s it going
Enjoying the excuse for a re-read btw
While the two women were talking, a scene completely different was taking place a foot away from them but it could as well have been a million miles away. Nathaniel was there, in the form of a pure untainted white ball. That ball was representing everything Nathaniel was, everything he knew and everything he ever experienced. In that ball was everything that was making Nathaniel a person, that was making him a human being. His accomplishments, his faults, his feelings, his qualities and of course, his default.
Immaculate Spirit
Urban · Newbiel
His default? Humans have a default setting?
While the two women were talking, a scene completely different was taking place a foot away from them but it could as well have been a million miles away. Nathaniel was there, in the form of a pure untainted white ball. That ball was representing everything Nathaniel was, everything he knew and everything he ever experienced. In that ball was everything that was making Nathaniel a person, that was making him a human being. His accomplishments, his faults, his feelings, his qualities and of course, his default.
Immaculate Spirit
Urban · Newbiel
Thanks for the chapters and not leaving us on a cliff! :)
Ce chapitre a été supprimé.
Immaculate Spirit
Urban · Newbiel
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
Jack of Arts
Urban · Intayaw_din_Dagem