Congratulations for such an amazing peace of work. An intriguing, unique story with lovely, realistic characters. It was a treat to read :)
Its a beautiful, unique story. I suppose the father will remain a mystery though I think he might be the guy who stole the crown and found Anita at the Palace, so Raphael better not find him.
A beautiful chapter! I'm glad he let go of his father's coin. Powerful words..the man he remembered was precious but he may not like the one he might find. A new peaceful beginning with his only family Anita. And I'm glad Maria left...at least for now...LOL!
don't try to act too much Raphael..Riley knows already.
Raphael shook his head, "None indeed sure. I think they mistook me for someone else," he looked to Anita, "They were after Ann. Are we in some sort of danger?"
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Realistic · Chickadee1235555
haha!
"If that's the case, I'm surprised you bothered to come in person," Raphael whispered back, "I almost feel special."
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Realistic · Chickadee1235555
Looks like Maria is going to stay with them. I really don't like her :(
Brilliant! I hope Riley and Sam can sit and talk and improve their relationship and he can be a father figure for Raphael and Anita too. I actually like Sam as a romantic partner for Raphael, she's more suited to him than Maria. Probably Anita can stay with Sam while Raphael serves his prison sentence, which should be reduced for helping catch Unknown Royals, saving the Queen and catching Benji gang. Please send Maria back to where she came from..I still don't like her..unless the Queen wants to keep her. And let's forget about Raphael's father too..who abandons their child just like that?
Ah..too much drama.
I really really hope Anita is acting..she's smart enough to pull this off. But the green eyes?
Raphael bit down on his lip at the sight of Anita. Her eyes now bright green, aside from a passing comment of a headache and the occasional tilting of her head, she showed no signs of being in pain. "So why am I summoned then? I cannot be vengeful to mine enemies if mine enemies no longer exist!" Anita seemed outraged, "And in a vessel such as this? A mere child? And a girl no less! How, if I am to be any authority, shall I strike fear in a body such as this?" Anita seemed genuinely irritated.
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Realistic · Chickadee1235555
A brilliant piece of work, unique story with suspense and adventure, beautifully written. The story keeps you hooked and the characters keep you captivated. This deserves a lot more appreciation. I'm glad I found this gem.
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Realistic · Chickadee1235555