The protagonist of Boss in School is strong, but if you compare him to other stories, he is a bit average. He just looks at the degree of destruction of fights on Lookism or Manager Kim, they are a completely different world.
[Age: 19; MP: 00; HP: 10; STR: 35; AGI: 30; VIT: 50; INT: 15; PERC: 15]
Anime & Comics · Culture_Lover
:o
Nope, he's an OC
Bro, it's rare to find a Halo fanfic on this page, and even rarer is that you've reached 50 chapters and you won't abandon it. As a fan of the franchise I give you 5 stars. Now, as for criticism, I would recommend that you do not write large paragraphs, perhaps 3-4 lines at most, because it is tiring to the eye. The story, although it is somewhat new, is quite lost in the idea of mixing a world like that of Halo with a fantasy theme of powers like in Strar Wars, so I don't know if many will like it. As a recommendation, I would say that you continue writing until you can finish your fanfic, this will help you perfect your narrative.
Spiritual jade milk... of course
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Book&Literature · ImmortalCockroach
You know, in Chinese novels everything is very big (I think it's a complex)
The Azure Cloud Continent is about five million kilometers away from both the Profound Sky Continent and the Illusory Demon Realm. Even cultivators at the Sovereign Profound Realm couldn't traverse this distance; aside from the dangers along the way, they would deplete their energy before even covering half the distance.
Book&Literature · ImmortalCockroach
Yep, I hate those things too. Happily there will be none of that nonsense in this fanfic. Robert will be able to kill any protagonist without problems, as he already did with the old man from Take a Peek.
[Host, you are an external entity that has become involved with these characters, so normally you should be rejected by these 'fates,' erased from this existence, as each of these characters must fulfill their roles. However, for now, these 'fates' cannot do anything against you due to the interaction of a force that surpassed the authority of each of them and allowed your arrival in this reality]
Anime & Comics · Culture_Lover
"Yeah, yeah, I was there, but, uh... I think I fell a bit behind with my farm" - the shy-looking boy named Yung-chan replied with an embarrassed smile.
Anime & Comics · Culture_Lover
"Absolutely! The coordination was flawless. That combo we pulled off in the Baron pit was epic" - another boy with blonde hair, named Hyuk-jin, chimed in.
Anime & Comics · Culture_Lover
He will soon be killed
[Hidden mission – ending trash brings benefits, completed! Eliminate Kim Yong-Su in the most brutal way possible, in retribution for his actions: reward 10 additional points earned]
ENJOYING KOREA
Anime & Comics · Culture_Lover