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2018-09-16 Joint United States
Leon when he gets off the lizard horse twice
Shaking my head in slight exasperation, I then hop off our favourite lizard mount before taking its reins and following behind the two as we moved toward a large hill.
Anime & Comics · DBoblivion
Is that cannon? If so it’s rather stupid to fully demote someone just for losing the card. A rank or two sure but from S->F?? Nevermind, just going to pretend he was never S rank and move on…
"A-Anyway," the receptionist continues, "unfortunately, as you seem to not have your card with you, you will have to pay a fee, and your rank will be reset to F. Please do understand. As you are only being demoted due to losing your card, you will have lower requirements for ranking up."
Anime & Comics · DBoblivion
He does but we haven’t actually seen him fight fight yet. Every time so far it was training where he was doing one or the other not everything he had at his disposal. This one didn’t count as he was already depleted and only had enough for one single attack. I will admit though I wish he had followed up on that lightning magic which fits his style more. But who knows he still has a lot of room for growth
He nods, "Hmm… I see. How interesting."
Anime & Comics · DBoblivion
When he became a Sword Saint it stated he recieved one. Even had a similar line of him picking up his jacket after sparing. So ima just pretend this contradiction didn’t happen lol.
After one reaches the Saint rank in the Sword God style, it is tradition for their teacher to get them a leather coat. And it was no different for me. But since I had become one so young, we decided to wait until I grew a bit more.
Anime & Comics · DBoblivion
No prob, a good rule of thumb is to mix both external means to identify and names. Which you already kinda do tbh. Just feels to stiff and formal when she uses names to much. For mixing… “What do you think Nat?” (Addressing a person directly which already establishes to the reader that ‘hey this Nat character will be speaking next’ From there the conversation can flow in third person… “…” the buxom red head said with an almost smug grin. Or whatever else El might say about a person, then you just use names when addressing a person. “El was just telling me about that”, or if multiple people are in a scene utilizing El to clarify who is speaking while Mara just speaks normally. Honesty it sounds more complex than it is but just read the character dialogues as if you were actually there speaking with someone you knew personally and see if it’s something you would say in a direct conversation with someone. Leave the clarification on who is speaking to El’s third person pov and have Mara use pet names like “Baldy”, “Pirate”, ect if you feel like you are overusing the third person pov. Granted I’m not an expert on these things so I may also be horribly wrong in how these things go but yea that’s my experience at least.
Still absolutely ravenous after the eventful day she had so far, Mara let go of her restraint and requested another helping of food, "Thanks Natalie! In that case can you order me a barbeque beef torta and a chicken quesadilla please? For some reason, all the gore made me hungry. Now that I say it out loud, that doesn't sound normal, right?"
Movies · BananaPancke
To add on a little, the best dialogues were between the two MC’s because of the pet names which bypass the whole name thing. But when it’s… “Yeah Mara…” “Thanks Natalie…” “To be expected Mara…” See what I mean? Idk I could be wrong
Still absolutely ravenous after the eventful day she had so far, Mara let go of her restraint and requested another helping of food, "Thanks Natalie! In that case can you order me a barbeque beef torta and a chicken quesadilla please? For some reason, all the gore made me hungry. Now that I say it out loud, that doesn't sound normal, right?"
Movies · BananaPancke
One thing I noticed is you use names to much. It took me a while to figure out why some of the dialogues felt off (kinda unnatural but not really in a ‘it’s bad’ way just not how normal conversation went) and i think it’s the names. Humans are lazy inherently, especially Americans and Brit’s when it comes to language. So like… “It was a good choice Mara. Do you want to try anything else?” “Good choice, wanna try anything else?” In writing being proper, having good sentence structure and punctuation is always crammed into our heads but we don’t actually speak like that. What we say doesn’t need to actually make sense for the other part to understand what we are trying to get across to them. Like if you fumble your words or can’t think of the proper word the other party might go “oh yeah so and so” because of context and tone which is hard to convey in written. Not a big deal but maybe something to help out? Even just dropping using names so often would make it flow smoother.
Still absolutely ravenous after the eventful day she had so far, Mara let go of her restraint and requested another helping of food, "Thanks Natalie! In that case can you order me a barbeque beef torta and a chicken quesadilla please? For some reason, all the gore made me hungry. Now that I say it out loud, that doesn't sound normal, right?"
Movies · BananaPancke
The police outside:
Fully expecting Natalie to have no particular advice for such queries, Mara and I were both quite shocked when the assistant actually tried to suggest a way to interact with the 'other consciousness'. It was also one that was fairly logical, "Actually I might have an idea that could work. One of the triggers we discussed was that you want to do something but don't know how, exactly, to do it, right? Well, I was thinking it might work in this situation. If you categorically want to speak with your other self, the door may open and allow communication between you two, hypothetically. Either that or they take over completely and I can speak to them for you, or, obviously, it doesn't work, and nothing happens at all. No matter what, I don't see any glaring negative outcomes in trying."
Movies · BananaPancke
She knows about the secret society?!
Rumi took her time to go through her stats panel although there weren't much to it yet. She felt that it was strange to see her age as 1 day even though she knew she recently crossed over to spul society after death.
Anime & Comics · Ruruch
See normally I would agree given the HP setting, but his personality is fine. It was already stated that Hogwarts isn’t a school, it’s more akin to a military institution where they are training future soldiers. An instructor told a group of trainee’s to “follow his orders”…kinda normal no? They need to get used to following orders and becoming more disciplined.
Asterion didn't conceal his dislike on his face. If Minerva McGonagall was a teacher worthy of the sacred title of educator, Severus Snape was the opposite. The man shouldn't be teaching anyone, let alone children; the disinterest in his voice was as clear as the bitter man's monotonous life.
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
I mean let’s be honest, they could have been a lot worse. Nothing in overlord is black and white
Harmonious Assimilation: The User's Growth is not limited to physical or combat-related attributes but extends to all facets of their being, including mental acuity, magical prowess, and emotional resilience. This holistic approach to growth ensures that the User becomes a well-rounded and adaptable individual.
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
"Kira! This time, I will devour you!"
Anime & Comics · HIT_ME_IF_YOU_CAN
Read this on night mode lol
Klaus was a bit worried now, he knew Elijah to be many things but not someone who would ignore his family. He looked towards Hayley and asked, "Has he not come back since morning?"
TV · Beelze1
betting on Kira
After witnessing the terrifying 1-on-1 between Kira and Loki, Ikki took a gamble he bet that Kira could hold off Loki and force him to pass the ball.
Anime & Comics · HIT_ME_IF_YOU_CAN
Some may say… “It ain’t that deep bro…It’s just soccer bro…”
Rin saw through Ikki's limits at the moment!
Anime & Comics · HIT_ME_IF_YOU_CAN
It’s kinda funny when you realize he became this revenge crazed psycho because his brother didn’t want to play a certain position anymore lol Like dude just realized Japan had a weaker team than the rest of the world and became a midfielder, which made his brother despise him because only strikers matter!
No one can stop my progress! I will definitely seek revenge against Itoshi Sae! And these people are just stepping stones on my path to revenge!
Anime & Comics · HIT_ME_IF_YOU_CAN
Maybe?
Kaori took a glance into the small mirror sticking to the shower door and, much to her surprise, was greeted by a tall, red-headed beauty. The woman had slightly more well-defined features, that were hidden well under the ANBU uniform, with a crimson wave of hair instead of Kaori's usual jet-black locks and a pair of crimson eyes instead of the usual dark green ones.
Anime & Comics · EchoingDusk
We have instincts ingrained in our subconscious mind even if we don’t notice them. When you’re walking and you see a red light in front of you, chances are you stop moving thinking it’s a stop light or something? BOOM dead from an explosive tag. She is thrown towards a body of water? Uh oh better get ready to swim! Wait? She could have just walked on it!! Man how stupid…ect. For humans in modern day society our base instincts have taken on a mold to fit our environment. ‘Danger’ to us may be missing a deadline at work, or running low on money. Thus our mind tricks our body into believing there is a ‘threat’. Shinobi, even though they have the same base instincts as we are both humans, have a different mold shaped by their environment. To them ‘danger’ could be a jutsu or a shuriken flying at them.
Flashes of memories, fragmented thoughts, and fleeting sensations of struggle and hard work danced in the void. It seemed as though her mind was being forced to merge with her body, instincts were overwritten by new ones and those that had traveled with her through the afterlife perished as they were overtaken by those of a Shinobi.
Anime & Comics · EchoingDusk
Oh nvm thought it said he was a bolder that rolled him off xD
He felt that Kira was not a person, but a massive boulder that had rolled off him, causing intense pain in Aoshi's shoulder.
Anime & Comics · HIT_ME_IF_YOU_CAN
Copying my host, also stepping forward, Melinda accepted Mara's handshake as she officially introduced herself, "Melinda Qiaolian May, nice to meet you."
Marvel: A Symbiote's Journey
Movies · BananaPancke