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Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
7 months ago
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He also doesn’t change his name until after saving Carne Village.

"Please rise Thoth, also, since you seem to be unaware, I have changed my name to Ainz Ooal Gown now, so refer to me as Ainz from this moment forward." Ainz then added: "Apologies for not informing you earlier or summoning you to the announcement, however, Albedo told me you were busy with another important task."

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

Anime & Comics · MarAuthor

Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
7 months ago
Commented

It’s Hero Hero, not Buku who make one last visit to the tomb. Not sure if this is part of your own plot or not?? If it is, then just ignore me.

"Bukubukuchagama! It's been so long! How have you been?"

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

Anime & Comics · MarAuthor

Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
9 months ago
Commented

+1

Persephone the Dread Queen: Despite popular belief Persephone isn't the Goddess of the Spring, rather this was a title bestowed upon her because Persephone' return from the Underworld symbolized the lessening of Demeter' wrath, leading to the ending of winter and the coming of spring. There are some versions of the mythos having Persephone predating Hades as a ruler of the Underworld by at least a thousand years and giving credit to the belief that the creation of Hades was most likely used as a way to make all the big three male. Persephone also has a lot of stories of her passing judgment on mortals she either favored or hated. Persephone unlike Hades was ruled by her emotions often making her capable of acting without thinking and being capable of being manipulated. This made people who sort something from the underworld only making their attempts when Persephone was present. Persephone was an exceedingly gorgeous Goddess, she was so beautiful her mother Demeter would hide her away from Olympus in fear of her fellow Gods reaction to it. Described as having the form of a tall young woman with an beautiful but pale face, her hair was dark and long that curled and flowed as if it was weightless. When within the Underworld her eyes took the color of an dying flower and held a haunted quality, whilst when in the overworld they shone with a healthy green glow like a flower during the bloom of spring.

Reborn as Hades In PJO

Reborn as Hades In PJO

Book&Literature · TheGreekMythosGuru

Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
12 months ago
Commented

No

Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
1 years ago
Commented

I think you should write more on his past lives and the impacts he created and left behind.

If you have any other recommendations for the story rewrite then please feel free to drop them either on this paragraph or the chapter comments!

Harry Potter: The God of Magic (BEING REWRITTEN)

Harry Potter: The God of Magic (BEING REWRITTEN)

Book&Literature · LazyCaveman

Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
1 years ago
Commented

Go for it!

3. And finally, this is not really a question related to this story, but i wanted to see what y'alls opinion on a Pokémon fanfic set in a medieval setting, or an Au in a more realistic world vs a story following the canon world and making it more similar to how the anime, manga and games are? I've read quite a few Pokémon stories on this app and most of them take place in a more realistic AU, i have yet to see a medieval one though, but what im getting at is im trying to see what the opinion of other readers is. Im not saying i will make one, im just curious that's it

Harry Potter: The God of Magic (BEING REWRITTEN)

Harry Potter: The God of Magic (BEING REWRITTEN)

Book&Literature · LazyCaveman

Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
1 years ago
Commented

I think it’s cool! He can build up something as the eons pass!

2. What is your thoughts on the whole bloodline reincarnation? would you rather i take a different approach to his reincarnations, or do you have any recommendations or critiques?

Harry Potter: The God of Magic (BEING REWRITTEN)

Harry Potter: The God of Magic (BEING REWRITTEN)

Book&Literature · LazyCaveman

Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
1 years ago
Commented

If you’re gonna tie it with this one then I think the Targaryen would be good. You could connect house Targaryen to House Reinhardt.

Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
1 years ago
Posted

I love this story! It’s following canon well and has some great add ins! The MC is cool too! He’s strong, but not impossibly godly strong. Also, cool unique OCs.

Branching_Spirit
Branching_Spirit
1 years ago
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The trick is just to glance over the x-rated stuff… and I know what you’re going to say—everything is x-rated. That’s where the mythology and back story comes in.