Tempuscineris

Tempuscineris

male LV 15

I am interested in reading some good light novels.

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6 days ago
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warn a large --> earn a large

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6 days ago
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Warnborn --> Warborn

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6 days ago
Commented

much easier --> much more easily

"I am." General Ark Larkinson plainly admitted. "I know what you are all thinking. Launching an active attack on an enemy fortified position is much more dangerous than limiting ourselves to passive defense. However, doing what is expected of us will not allow us to save the Duqaste System. The native aliens have us right where they want us. Ever since they have sent out small to medium-sized squadrons to harass our perimeter, we have been losing a steady amount of small craft. Our opponents are losing several times more phasefighters than our mechs, but the problem is that the native aliens can make up for these losses much easier. We cannot afford to remain locked in a battle of attrition for such a long duration."

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8 days ago
Commented

notmind --> not mind

Ves merely smiled at the sight. He did notmind his daughter's antics. Ketis had practically become Andraste's godmother. The bond between them was already very close.

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9 days ago
Commented

toes --> ties

She clearly wanted to pursue her own ideas, but unlike Ves, she had never mustered up the courage and the opportunity to sever her toes to her ancient clan and set up an independent organization around herself.

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9 days ago
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find ways --> found ways

Jovy nodded and smiled. "That is part of the reason why we view him with greater favor. Lord Richard Brownstone is successful not just because he possesses a good background, but also because he is serious about his craft and is not afraid of being met with failure after investing his time and attention on different projects. That said, the Age of Dawn has produced new conditions that happen to facilitate his design philosophy exceptionally well. By playing around with hyper materials, Lord Richard has not only find ways to improve much of his existing works, but also developed brand new high-attribute ammunition that can produce even more uncommon effects."

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The Mech Touch

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9 days ago
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materiel --> material

The simplest way to prevent the enemy from having its way was by reducing the loss rate of war materiel and mech pilots.

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9 days ago
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stured --> turned

Once the orven pilots realized they could no longer stop the first-class multipurpose mechs from attacking their siege vessel, they grew angry and stured all of their ire towards the second-class mechs that dared to slow down their fighter craft!

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9 days ago
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part --> apart

Even if the first-class multipurpose mech was no longer in a good condition, it still possessed more than enough firepower to blast part one of the elite phasefighters with ease!

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9 days ago
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to high --> too high

Their defenses were already fairly tough, but their offensive power was to high due to increased power levels and the use of phasewater.

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